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Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden

"an elf speaking of love" by Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden

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Once i asked an elf who lived in a tree

"why do you live there, and not with me?"

"For I dont behold a magic so strong,

of wich so many long"

"What do you mean?" I asked the elf from above

"It is the thing called love" said he

"A love so rare even the tree spirits call out her name..."

"Gwenlynn" they say...

"Gwendlynn"

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5 Nov 200345 Edana
I really like this story. to be totally honest, it even makes me blush (can you guess how good this must be)
I think you wrote it for someone special...and I'm sure she will be really touched by it!!
keep on writing!!!
5 Nov 200345 Phieke
Hey Joske ,
Really really really nice .. beautiful story !
Good luck with your sweetheart
kiss , Phie
13 Nov 2003:-) Frida M. Bergkvist
Oh! So beautiful! You're really god at writing, I wish I was to...

:-) Joeri 'Jos' verheyden replies: "who says you're not good in it? if you want to know a good advice: "love turns any man a poet""
29 Feb 200445 Anonymous
A special lady huh?? Is she really that special...

But she was more then touched by it...
11 Jul 2008:-) Razina Nicole Cedarleaf
Wow, this is deep! I love your writing style! Wow...whoever this is for will absolutely adore it ^_^ Good luck with future writing!
11 Aug 200845 Anon.
Try to work on your spelling errors, it can take away from the poem and shows carelessness. Fourth line "wich" - which doesn’t take away from the story. However, you mispelled her name, which I think is supposed to be a very important part of the poem.
11 Aug 200845 Anon.
lol, kind of funny how i just ’mispelled’ misspelled
26 Oct 2008:-) Emma Rose Woods
beautifully written! Very deep. Keep writing, you have are really good!
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'an elf speaking of love':
 • Created by: :-) Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden
 • Copyright: ©Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: An, Elf, Love, Of, Speaking
 • Categories: Elf / Elves, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love, Celtic
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