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Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden

"dragon order" by Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden

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Among the ordre of the Dragon do I belong

For I am sworn to protect those who need it

To help those who cannot

To sacrifice it all for others.

Then I will rank among the greatest of the earth

Be the one that gave it all for mankind

Be the one who will come back

And reign with the power of wisdom, knowledge

And the blessing of the Dragon of Protection.

For I am the one who will own the power of

The four elementary dragons: fire, earth, air and water.

They will be my allies, my power, my inspiration

On a quest to lead mankind into a new era

An era where evil will no longer have power

Within the harts of man.

Therefore will I begin on my journey to destiny

A path that will be hard and dangerous

But I wil move on

Not fearing for my live

For it is just but a fraction

Of what is, what was and what is yet to come.

But one day my live will end

Then I can rest

Go to sleep and never wake up again

For I am among the ordre of the Dragon

I will rest among the greatest of the earth

Then my work is done

Then I wil live on in legend and myth

And spend eternity watching over the one thing

That I protected all along:

The present

The past

And the futureů

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5 Nov 200345 Ilse
Goed, kheb het dus gelezen. Raar da ge op zoiets komt vindik, begrijpelijk da ge daar lang aan hebt gezeten. Het is ni iets da ik zo zou lezen als ge het ni gevraagd zou hebbe ofzo, want ik ben daar ni zo echt in ge´nteresseerd, ma ik vindet sjiek geschreven!ik hoop da ge iets aan mijn commentaar hebt he 2 want kweet ni goed wa ik hier moet schrijven... Alleszinds, kvondet mooi geschreve!!
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10 Nov 200345 Miguel Francis Ettema
Greetings 2
Can I clarify; English is not your first language, and Dutch is? If so, I can excuse the spelling errors 2 The grammar, however, needs improving; you are missing a lot of periods (.) where they are meant to be, unless this is a poem of sorts, in which case you needs to put line breaks at the end of every stanza. In html code, that is "<br>" at the end of every line that should stop.
Keep Writing!
11 Nov 200345 Miguel Francis Ettema
Ah! You fixed it 2 It reads great.
Keep Writing!
16 Oct 200445 Aleheha
So true, the elements a heart lives out by a noble faith alone, the rhapsody of fire, your strong dragon soul protecting each essence of life
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'dragon order':
 • Created by: :-) Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden
 • Copyright: ©Joeri ´Jos´ verheyden. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dragon, Order
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins, Celtic
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