|18 Feb 1999|| William J Riley|
Good job! I like the metre and the repitition of the first stanza. I envision these words engraved in ancient runes along the healer's staff, his/her satchel and bowl bearing the sigil,"Come, that I may heal you"... very nice.
|18 Feb 1999|| Skysong D'Kestrel|
Yep, looked good on GryphBoard, looks good here....Elynna will be happy.
|26 Feb 1999|| Delphinius|
* gryphon swoops in and lands * Yesss, I agree with Mr. Riley, it does ring true with what a Healer would stand by. * Considers converting it to Gryphonics and burning it into his staff (but not without your permission)* * GrYnZ and takes wing *
|1 Mar 1999|| Mysty, da writer|
'Elyas Del, welcome to the twisted world of my mind *grin*. You can put it wherever you want, and in whatever language you want. *shrugs* I really don't mind, as long as I am asked. Thanks for commenting.
|23 May 1999|| Jessica M. Jordan|
Very nice! I wasn't ready for it to end as quick as it did.. *S*
|4 Jun 1999|| MystWyng, da Writer|
*L* I could have repeated it a few times, but I didn't think anyone would appreciate that. It's a mantra, or a chant, and I didn't want it so long that the Healer in question wouldn't be able to remember it. Thanks for the comment though!
|15 Feb 2004|| Bigjballz|
Blah blah blah this poem is so pathetic what did it take a total vocabulary read out of about ten different words.Not only was is short you then had to repeat the beginning i could see that happening if you were a 3rd grade student not someone writing on a web site.Well sorry but this poem sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ahahahhahahah