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"Healer´s Mantra" by Joy Adele Dalton

SciFi/Fantasy text 4 out of 5 by Joy Adele Dalton.      ←Previous - Next→
 
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I wrote this for a friend's RPG character. Hope you like it Elynna!
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Come to me, so that I may soothe your sorrow.

Come to me, so that I may ease you pain.

Come to me, so that I may bind you wounds.

Come to me, so that I may heal you.



Here is my shoulder, use it to cry on.

Here are my hands, use them to comfort you.

Here is my knowledge, use it to cure you.

Here is my skill, use it to help you.

Here is my heart, use it to love you.



Come to me, so that I may soothe your sorrow.

Come to me, so that I may ease your pain.

Come to me, so that I may bind your wounds.

Come to me, so that I may heal you.

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18 Feb 199945 William J Riley
Good job! I like the metre and the repitition of the first stanza. I envision these words engraved in ancient runes along the healer's staff, his/her satchel and bowl bearing the sigil,"Come, that I may heal you"... very nice.
18 Feb 199945 Skysong D'Kestrel
Yep, looked good on GryphBoard, looks good here....Elynna will be happy.
26 Feb 199945 Delphinius
* gryphon swoops in and lands * Yesss, I agree with Mr. Riley, it does ring true with what a Healer would stand by. * Considers converting it to Gryphonics and burning it into his staff (but not without your permission)* * GrYnZ and takes wing *
1 Mar 199945 Mysty, da writer
'Elyas Del, welcome to the twisted world of my mind *grin*. You can put it wherever you want, and in whatever language you want. *shrugs* I really don't mind, as long as I am asked. Thanks for commenting.
23 May 1999:-) Jessica M. Jordan
Very nice! I wasn't ready for it to end as quick as it did.. *S*
4 Jun 199945 MystWyng, da Writer
*L* I could have repeated it a few times, but I didn't think anyone would appreciate that. It's a mantra, or a chant, and I didn't want it so long that the Healer in question wouldn't be able to remember it. Thanks for the comment though!
15 Feb 200445 Bigjballz
Blah blah blah this poem is so pathetic what did it take a total vocabulary read out of about ten different words.Not only was is short you then had to repeat the beginning i could see that happening if you were a 3rd grade student not someone writing on a web site.Well sorry but this poem sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ahahahhahahah
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'Healer's Mantra':
 • Created by: :-) Joy Adele Dalton
 • Copyright: ©Joy Adele Dalton. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Healer, Mantra, Poem
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