|18 Feb 1999|| Skysong D'Kestrel|
Heylas Mysty!!! Of course your stuff's good, I proofread it, 'member? *gg* Likes de poems, and the story's cute, and not too sappy.
|23 Aug 2000|| James K Bowers|
Thanx for sharing your imagination with us... I enjoyed your poems... And 'It Won't Be Dull' wasn't dull, but it did seem to me like you tried to stuff twenty pounds of fantasy into a five pound sack... You may want to expand both segments of this so it flows more smoothly and doesn't seem like you're forcing the story to happen... Wonderful concept, though... Looks like it could really "take off"...