| 15 Dec 2003 |  ^_^Your Dragon Twin^_^ | AWWWW I didn't get the first comment aw well. YEEIII!!! my dragontwin is published^_^ ur story and poem rock u gotta stop saying ur a bad writer cuz ur not ur AMAZING!!! So u better get that story finished cuz i can't wait to c whats next*pacing around anxiously* And there better be some really kool dragons in it^_^   Jacqueline-Seren Rhiannon Kimiko Jones replies: " How did you find my page?!?!?! This is kind of embarrassing... Anyways, thanks for the comment and don't worry there will be dragons...(maybe even one called Liane...)" | |
| 15 Dec 2003 |  C. Michael Martin | | |
| 23 Dec 2003 | Ladan | I think that is great for a intro hope to see that story. Thanks Fugly!!! Hee hee!! | |
| 11 Jan 2004 |  Emily Day Proctor | Welcome and hello! (which are basically the same things). A few comments: I like your originality in names and races. Your prologue bit is very well done. short and gets the point across beautifully. Really. Your poem is rather good, as well. I enjoyed reading this on your page and hope you update soon. I'll stop by every once and awhile to check on new updates. Jacqueline-Seren Rhiannon Kimiko Jones replies: " Thank you!! I'm almost done my next story. It should be up soon!" | |
| 14 Jan 2004 |  Aly Laine | wow what a wonderful poem.. it is so amazing that i even decided to put on music, if, of course, you allow me and if i ahve enough patience and talent  P.S. Thanks for comments on my gallery, come back again!  Jacqueline-Seren Rhiannon Kimiko Jones replies: " I'd love that!!! I'm so honored that anyone would even think of putting it to music!! I definitely will visit your gallery again! Your work is so good!! In fact, could I link you to my gallery? I meant to ask you that in my original comment but I forgot..." | |
| 27 Jan 2004 |  Geneva ' V.G.' Sinclair | Hello, neighbor! Finally getting back to you. Sorry about the wait! Us sixteen year olds, you know? We should all be shot. JUST KIDDING!!!lol. I havent read any of your stuff yet, but I'm going to in just a minute. I'll comment on the actual things, if I feel like commenting. Ciao! Jacqueline-Seren Rhiannon Kimiko Jones replies: " Yeah, we should! lol! Thanks for coming!" | |
| 2 Feb 2004 |  Norma Peters | Jacqueline, you aksed if you could base a story on Bitter Wind and link my gallery. The answer, of course, is yes to both. I'd be delighted.  Jacqueline-Seren Rhiannon Kimiko Jones replies: " Thanks, I'll do it as soon as the merge is all cleared up!" | |
| 23 May 2007 |  CK Miller | Just leaving a not for everyone I can find in the library.
The Keys to becoming a successful author! Take care of them. - you must always remember this when you are writing. Sight, sound, taste, smell and feeling! They are simple, but many times, if you miss one of these, the book or story just isn’t what it could be! Don’t be afraid to describe in depth of what you see. Your readers don’t know your world. If you want to show them exactly what you are creating, you need to be specific! | |
| 12 Dec 2007 | Matt/Amimir | Guess who!  And I loved it, you're writing is... amazing. | |
