| 5 Jul 2004 | Daniel Maertens | Loading...you pay alot of attention to anatonmy and construction. More or less formal issues, might i suggest working more in the composition more, this could be a really magnificent piece, just have a few things to add. Justin R. Wilkes replies: "Thanks, that really made my day, i really do work hard on the anatomy of my characters, correct proportions are important to me, unless it is intentional, i do have trouble with adding detail, im not sure if that is what "composition" is, (not very familiar with art terms) truth is, im not that patient to add too much detail, if i start another pic, i may as well call the one before it finished, because i almost never get back to the last one. most of the time i notice my mistakes before people can point them out, but im truly greatfull when people point something out that i never notice." | |
| 12 Mar 2006 | BOB the bastard | Loading...I love it an d have to agree with what Daniel said. Its form is perfect and both anatomically and proportinatly correct. Can you do some more bird men pics pls. I'll keep my eye out for them if u do. Maybe even colour and a background too?
Gr8 work, keep it up. | |
| 20 Apr 2007 | Corny | Loading...The proportions are pretty good as far as I can tell, however you might want to consider working deeper in the figure - within the outlining...The twisted knee facing the viewers would be far more visible if a few lines around its hip/abdomen showed that the body was twisting...
Oh and Its a question of taste i know but...Bigger wings....Gives them som Ooomph | |