| 25 Sep 2002 |  R.E. 'Riibu' Kankaanpää | You noticed that I read those two.. and please. When you do continue the story for us, drop by and hint to come here. I'd really like that. They're so darn good! (And I really should have remembered to Welcome you too..  )   Elizabeth Ann Costa replies: "Thanks for the welcome  I feel so special... yes, I'll tell you when I update =]" | |
| 28 Sep 2002 |  Christine D. Nadon | Hey Eli, when you update, let me know, okies?
Thanks. And by the way, you kick butt! | |
| 30 Sep 2002 |  Nicole antoinette hamdahl | Yeah, all they have said! ^_~
Oh, about the mistake for "I" to "she"? That s'ok! If you saw my errors, you would now what's a grammar mistake. ¬¬
Yeah, I'm out! ^_^ Keep it up (always!)! | |
| 10 Oct 2002 |  Karen J. Zanko | Hey, I just wanted to drop by and tell you that the next chapter of my story is, as you seemed to enjoy it =) Enjoy! | |
| 16 Nov 2002 |  Renee Reizman | Oh my god, this is a great story! I love what's going on, and it's such an awesome piece!!! You are so much better then me, waah! Anyways, I need to know what happens next. And, are those elven words real? (Really odd question, I know.)
Right, enough ranting.. Just put the rest up, let me read it all, and no one gets hurt!! Hehe, I don't mean that, but seriously, you have awesome talent. | |
| 16 Dec 2002 |  R.E. 'Riibu' Kankaanpää | Awww... It's been times and times, but we still have to live our little lives without more of your excellent writing... I'm still looking forward to get to the bottom of this story (yes!), and may it be long.
Don't hesitate to drop by, ^_^. | |
| 31 Dec 2002 |  Vicki "Kiddalee" Nemeth | This is a great start, though I wish the font had seriffs(i.e. Times New Roman, Book Antiqua). You have great description of action, though the inner person during less active scenes could use some work. There are nice positive emotions in the story, but descriptions of negative emotions could be improved to the point where the reader is gripped by the need for more. Thank you for your vivid imagery! I'll be bookmarking this shelf to see more of your talent. | |
| 9 Jan 2003 |  Emma H. Snövej Hoffström | Hey Elizabeth, thanks for visiting!  I don't have time to read your story, but the title makes it sound great. I know how you feel about getting side tracked! I do that all the time, usually when the story travels on and on and on or when it gets boring or loses its touch on me. ^^ And yes, finding a publisher is *hard*! -.- looking isn't easy. If I find anything interesting I'll see if I can let you know! ~Gotta run -Emma | |
| 24 Jan 2003 |  Christine D. Nadon | *pokes Elizabeth* Sorry to pester you, but I updated with two new stories! I would love to see what you think of 'em. Thanks.
~Spike | |
| 2 Dec 2003 |  Amy J. Cook | Hello, are you new? my old neighbour must have moved...i'm in the gallery next door...
yes, anyway, i like your story, very cool. have fun! | |
