| 14 Jun 2001 |  Ryan | Man you are such a good writer I can't believe you don't have more comments. People dont know what they are missing! | |
| 25 Nov 2001 |  Melissa Ng *DeviantTrace* | You are an amazing writer! Your writings are fantastic! Can't wait to read more of your writings! §(^_^)§ | |
| 13 May 2002 | Sendark | Found it! Duh, sorry.   Marlena Andrea Cannon replies: "Heh heh... sorry. "Malraune" was my working title for years. I finally got a real title, "Ghosts of the Golden City" from my fiance!" | |
| 29 Jan 2003 |  Jorieke 'JoSav' Savelkouls | There, I went off to read and forgot to logout as artist. I have some writing in my library now but it's in english so not all that good. My best english writing is a fanfic *shameful sigh* Ah well. Keep it up and I will try to escape from my busy schedule once in a while to check up on your writing. ^_^  Marlena Andrea Cannon replies: "No worries. I went to your library page anyway.  And thanks to you, I finally typed up a couple of my poems! " | |
| 5 Feb 2003 | Lisa Ann Eshkenazi | I'm back!! The leaver of long and strange comments!! But I'm mostly back to say I didn't forget about you and your story---I'm just been preoccupied. Right now my son is harassing me but I'll be back to read the rest of it sometime---possibly Friday...or Saturday. Anyhow, I can't wait to read the stuff you've added since I was last here!! | |
| 23 Mar 2003 |  Sarah Colley | Wonderful! I especially liked the imagery in chapter 5.  Marlena Andrea Cannon replies: "Thanks! Eee, that's my mod's choice chapter!" | |
| 22 Apr 2003 | Shiskysha | I can't wait for the next chapter! I really enjoy your writing, and your poem, it provides a unique perspective on an old story. That's needed every once and a while in order to better understand the story. Keep updating!  Marlena Andrea Cannon replies: "Thanks! The updates will come... I'm just not sure when. I'm so busy, trying to graduate with my B.A. this quarter!" | |
| 18 Apr 2004 |  Sarah Lee Williamson | Hey, I first became interested through your stories when I stopped by to look at your art. Your story is fantastic, I'm enthralled by it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I've gotten to know the characters well. Keep writing and drawing! | |
| 13 Jun 2005 |  Chelsea R. Doop | Love it! Love it! Love it! Finish it! Finish it! Finish it! Finish it!
Before you ask... No i'm not a parrot. I just like to repeat repeat repeat myself. Thank you very much! Much! Much! | |
| 1 Mar 2006 |  Erin M. Ramos | Hi! I just finished reading your story. It's very exciting and I'm completely enthralled. Please let meknow when you update | |
