SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by Brianna C. Kennedy

Like I said before, Greetings from next door! Your poetry is wonderful and it has a nice flow to it. Keep up the good work! ^_^
~Laura

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "Thank-you very much I appreciate the comments! "

Hallooo~! Here we go, a summary just for you ^_~ I have read all your works now, and I must say, you write quite well for a thirteen year old ^_~ One the whole, there are bits and pieces that have room for improvement, but these things come with time. Even eighty-year-old writers are still learning ^_^. Your poetry has a simple interesting style, and possesses certain lines and concepts that are positively incredible (particularly for your age). I can’t wait to see what you come up with in a few years ^_^. Your story is quite well written too. My advice? Work on general thought flow and run on sentences. Get someone to run your work over with you (though not in the literal sense) if you can, as that always ameliorates writings ^_~. Your description is rather good in both your writing and your poetry. Keep up the great work, you show much promise, in my opinion ^___^ I’ll check up on you, I look forward to seeing what else you come up with ^_~

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "You sound a lot like my english teacher, always yelling at me because of my run on sentances. *picks up a piece of paper with tire marks on it* Hmmmm maybe I should read what's in parenthisis. ) I'm going to put my 3rd and 4th chapter up soon."

Brianna... your writing is truly amazing! It's hard for me to deal with the fact that you're only 13... I'm 23 and can only hope to ever write something as powerful as anything you have written. Keep it up... time can only bring improvement... oh and I hope you put up the next chapters to your story very soon... I'll definitely be back to read it!

~Phoenix~

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "Blah, I'm 14 now and I don't write that well. You should check out my friend, Jennifer Watkins. Now SHE is a good writer! *nods* I'll be putting the next chapters up when my teachers stop being bungholes and piling homework up on me. ^-^ I'm sure you write perfectly fine. Thank you for your comments though."

I love your poems, they're so inspiring! I just wanted to go draw when I read them. And I think that's just what I'm gonna do. Once I again, I *LOVE* your poems!

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "Inspiring again. ^^ If anyone ever makes something because of my crappy poems, please tell me. I'd love to see the beauty crap inspires."

You happen to be a good writter and seem to be stronger in stories than poetry (just an oppinion) you have a great talent and hope to see you publish something some day

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "Nah, probably won't publish anything. I don't think I'm great in either poems or stories. Check out Miss. Jennifer C. Watkins writing. Gorgeous."

From what I read of your work it seems as if you are a very good writer, I left a comment on the Forbidden angel's first chapter, when I have more time I will read the other chapters.

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "Wow... You liked that? I still have all my awful ramblings for that story in my binder, but... I haven't worked on it, and probably won't anymore because... it made me angry. Very angry. Thank-you so much though *hug*"

No no no! That's the worst thing any writer can do! Every story I've written has made me angry at one point or another, I even felt like I should just stop writing it. But if the story is flowing in a way you don't like, re write some of it and see how it feels. If the plot no longer gives you the same thrill it did when you first started, add an unexpected twist. Remember, an authors greatest tool is now his/her writing skills, it's the imagination.

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "I began writing this when I first met Jennifer... my god... over 4 years ago. I have problems writing stories like that. I don't like having a character and dragging it out. I enjoy writing shorter stories more, which I'm sure I could bunch that together and turn it into a short story but... *shrug* I also don't like the characters anymore. Kalita.. Aiirek... *shakes head* I'd happily throw giant books at their heads now."

Brianna, I finally have my stories updated. Be sure to check it out soon.

-Kyle

Brianna C. Kennedy replies: "I will; thank-you for telling me!"

I have a question about your Forbidden Angel Chapter Two. In the scene where you describe the "faceless Angel with black wings" you mention various ways an Angel can fall from grace. Did you find this information, or did it just come to you as you were writing this passage?