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"Like Mist" by Imelda Weijers

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A sad poem about a man who meets a ghost and becomes a ghost himself.
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Like Mist


From the corner of my eye I saw her
like mist
floating

Her white tendril fingers reached out to me
cold as ice
I shivered

Her sad whispering voice sang to me
of love
everlasting

I let her take me into her sweet embrace
a kiss
so tender

I stayed with her, all time forgotten
I'm lost
forever

She passed the way of unliving on to me
and then
she left

My restless soul will never find peace again
always
searching

My loneliness drove me to seek out others
to hunt
the living

From the corner of her eye she saw me
like mist
floating

My white tendril fingers reached out to her
cold as ice
she shivered

~    ~    ~

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23 Nov 2005:-) Meike de Nooy
This one is awesome! I like the ending, very clever to give us a hint of continueation..
Really love this one! goos job!
23 Nov 2005:-) Steph Steph Salt
Scarey but lovely at the same time Kethram, I really like this one. I don't know if I have time to paint a picture based on it? Sorry, besides I'm not very good at misty subjects.
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'Like Mist':
 • Created by: :-) Imelda Weijers
 • Copyright: ©Imelda Weijers. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Cold, Embrace, Everlasting, Ghost, Ice, Kiss, Love, Mist, Undead
 • Categories: Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions, Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 417

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