| 17 Oct 2001 |  Victor Joseph Kinzer | No it's not finished. And in the strictest meaning of the word it never will be. Have you ever read Issac Asimov's short stories about robots. These stories are similar. They are set in the world of a role-playing game I am creating and planning on selling with some friends of mine. Frederick and Grul are going to be ongoing characters. And the players will have the opportunity to submit suggestions on what direction they want the story to go. So it will continue. But I personally hope it is never "finished" | |
| 17 Oct 2001 |  Andrea 'Silver1' Bodel | hello, i'm looking to get people to help my friend, he believes hes an awful writer, I think he's wrong. Please comment on his page? http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/libr/t/h/thomasowen/?1003336021
Anyway, about your work, which I'm sure you consider far more important I LOVE A TOUCH OF CHULGA!!!
Only you need to finish it. Its not finished! | |
| 17 Oct 2001 |  Victor Joseph Kinzer | That's very strange. It has me listed as having all three types of art galleries when I don't have any. Hmmm. That's odd. | |
| 17 Oct 2001 |  Victor Joseph Kinzer | Dear Gods. I've been checking every day and you got here even before I did. Tell me what you think, and be brutal. They aren't at all edited. But they will be soon. I will update them when they are. | |
| 18 Oct 2001 |  Anneliese "CalicoTiger" Stehwien | Rats! I'm a day late commenting! Hehehe, now that your links SAY you have those other galleries, you'll just have to create them so we're not teased  Congrats on finally joining the woods, Victor! *throws skittles at Chelsey for beating her* | |
| 25 Oct 2001 |  Chelsey E. Eaton | *looks at Anneliese and catches some skittles that she throws* mmm skittles... hehe! | |
| 25 Oct 2001 |  Chelsey E. Eaton | I finally left comments on your stuff. Sorry it took a while. I really like your story, even though I'm usually not that much into scifi, it's very good. You think you could stop by my library and tell me what you think? I mean if it's not to much trouble, I'd really appreciate it. | |
| 2 May 2002 |  Alyssa Sloan Ullmeyer | These two pieces are very fun and inventive. I empathize with your spelling problems. Sometimes when I type I swear my fingers have minds of their own. I hope you'll continue writing about this world and the interactions of the two species. I want to read more. Anyway, great work and good luck on present and future projects! | |
| 30 Sep 2005 |  Larry N. Morris | Congratulations for being chosen Writer of the Day!
Man. it's been a looooog time since anyone commented here. Comment of the works of others and most of them will return the favor.
Write on! | |
| 1 Oct 2005 |  Jetta | Very creative piece. The feeling is very innovative. As far as critisim goes, the first story doesn't have a very strong start or anything that is really a "reader grabber." Some parts were hard to follow, but that may just be because of the grammatical and spelling errors (although im no spelling genious myself...im more a "jenious with a J"  ). Keep working at it, lots of promise there! | |
