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Karin M. Mayville
Karin M. Mayville is a member of The Wyvern"s Library at Elfwood.


 
 

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PhotoKarin M. Mayville is a girl who's obsessed with vampires and just loves to make boys cry.
 

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14 May 2007:-) Stacy M. Leng
Hi Karin! Welcome to the woods! *hands over basket of fresh scones*

So, I've read Chapters one and two of your story, and I've got to say that I like them! I saw a lot of little things, like spelling or grammar mistakes, but those are easily fixed. When I have more time I'll come back and tell you what's wrong (unless you really don't want me to, for some reason).

Anyway, you've got a good idea, good flow, and it's all very interesting. Keep writing!

13 Karin M. Mayville replies: "Thanx! and I'd appreciate some help, especially with chapter 2. Thank you again for the comment!"
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