| 14 May 2007 |  Stacy M. Leng | Hi Karin! Welcome to the woods! *hands over basket of fresh scones* So, I've read Chapters one and two of your story, and I've got to say that I like them! I saw a lot of little things, like spelling or grammar mistakes, but those are easily fixed. When I have more time I'll come back and tell you what's wrong (unless you really don't want me to, for some reason). Anyway, you've got a good idea, good flow, and it's all very interesting. Keep writing!   Karin M. Mayville replies: "Thanx! and I'd appreciate some help, especially with chapter 2. Thank you again for the comment!" | |
