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Jenn ´Kirbyina´ Wood

"Sorrows of Death" by Jenn ´Kirbyina´ Wood

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The fact is we're all gonna die somday and we usually find our spirits stick around after.
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In a forest

Dark and deep

A dragon rider

She did weep.

 

Next to here

A heap in the grass

Her dragon knew

His time had passed.

 

His wing was bent

His scales were worn

His rider hugged him

She knew to mourn.

 

Her tears of sorrow

Dappled his face

And his old out-beat heart

Began to race.

 

His vision did blur

He drew his last breath

His head fell down heavy

He knew it was death

 

The breeze ran through the valley

It made his belly sore

And not that it’s forgotten

The dragon knew no more.

 

Later on that evening

His spirit flew the skies

He found his saddened rider and

Dried her tear strung eyes

 

Even though his riders love

Made his sadness sear.

He knew he had to continue on,

So his spirit disappeared

 

 

 

 

 

 

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7 Oct 200445 Malekith
I like it a lot. I love dragons and it's finally good to see someone write about them. If I was any good at writing I might try it but I think I'll stick to drawing pictures.5

7 Jenn 'Kirbyina' Wood replies: "Well, if you ever decide to try writing poetry,ill certainly come read it!"
21 Nov 200445 Magician Girl of Darkness
Oh! This is so sad! *cries* Poor Mr. Dragon! Waah! I love the way this is written, but it's so sad!

:-) Jenn 'Kirbyina' Wood replies: "I tried to make it as sad as i could. "
9 Dec 200445 Katie!!! (aka ur second adopted sister) k
Wow Jen, this is really excellent work. I hope you continue writing, and persueing this amazing talent =).......... I really enjoyed this, and you write beyond your years, its awesome!!!!

12 Jenn 'Kirbyina' Wood replies: "awww. Thanks KT Bear! Your soo nice. "
20 Dec 200445 Jessica L. Fan
this is so well written! It's such a sad story tho *sniff* hope you'll continue writing more great things like this!
9 Jan 2005:-) Norma Peters
Awww! You've done a wonderful job of portraying sorrow. I was touched by the honest emotion of your words. You have a talent for this - Never give it up!
5 Feb 200545 Zoe
Wow Jenn, That was very good....Infact it was better than good, it was amazing!!! It was really sad!!

Keep up the amazing work!!

~*Zoe*~
29 Aug 2005:-) Sophia Tula Rose Dique
Wow, that was really nice. Simple and so sweet - and sad of course, but I didn't think I needed to stress that as everyone else already did. 14
26 Feb 2007:-) Dragonsluver
A very pretty and heart-touching poem! I loved it!
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About 'Sorrows of Death':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Jenn ´Kirbyina´ Wood
 • Copyright: ©Jenn ´Kirbyina´ Wood. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Dragon, Sorrow, Love
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 163


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