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"Little Rhyme" by Kathryn Z. Newill

SF&F Picture 3 out of 6 by Kathryn Z. Newill

A tiny poem that tells a tiny lesson.

In times of old,

When all was gold,

There lived a girl,

As white as a pearl.

Strange she was,

For the man she loves,

Loves her in return,

Their fire does burn.

And so we learn,

From fires that burn,

Of times of old,

When all was gold.

Date	Name	Comment
21 Aug 2001	Oishee Alam	Loading... ehehe i like this quite a lot, it seemed to me quite surreal and haunting for some reason. the only line i didn't like was "There lived a girl, as white as a pearl" It seemed to be too.. rhymey.. if u know what i mean..
12 Mar 2002	Kelly	Loading... I reallylove your poems. They really have touched me.