|4 Jan 2003|| Roseanne E. Sherman|
Oooooooooh! *first comment touchdown-style dance!* *gets a penalty for dancing in the endzone--awww* This is neat. . . I might have to "steal" it for some coloring purposes ^_~ (not that I don't trust you to do it yourself *laughs* but it looks like a fun one to color) Anyway, uber!
|13 Apr 2003|| Anatomy Punk|
First off: her legs are straight sticks. Her calves should have calf muscles. For some reason I can't explain they don't look like they are connecting to her body at the right spots. The hand is horribly twisted and blocky looking. I suggest going for a more graceful position. If you need to, use your hand for a reference, or a photo, or even another anime drawing (though I don't think one should rely too heavily on references). Her arm is too straight, has no muscle definition, and no elbow. The line of the eye is strange. And the position of it is strange, too, but I can't put my finger on why it looks that way. The ear... maybe just a smidgeon out of place... too far back maybe. Her neck is an eency bit thick, it looks like. I'm sure you'd add more detail to the wings to when you colored it, as right now they're a little bland. Otherwise, beautiful beautiful. (sorry if I don't say nice things, I'd just rather give you what you can use; assume that if I don't comment on it I liked it, and it was good, k?)