"Travel by Moonlight" by Charity ´Leiko´ Koone

*faery walks into your midst* Welcome to elfwood! Wait... no has commented?!? Aaaaaa! *faery does the first comment ritual* I would like to say hi, I am the stardust faery at elfwood! I try to comment as many places as possible, if you ever need any help just let me know, I check up all the time! *faery nods and motions to the poem* yes, i am getting to that!
Your poem was excellent! If i may say so, it was a bit short, but I shouldn't really talk considering some of my poems are really short too ^.^ Your words flowed and you kept good rhythm... only one little thing got me... you use the word 'divine' twice... that won't work because the poem is short... if it was longer it MIGHT work, but not for a poem of this length... maybe instead of the last line, you could try 'immortal as time' or something like that... that's a bad example, but you get the idea ^.^
*faery waves and smiles goodbye*