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"Dante´s Prayer" by Christina Lee

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This is just a random poem that I wrote. I, personally find the subject matter very interesting. Please comment!
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Dante's Prayer

Footsteps echo through the empty cathedral
Spiders tremble beneath their cobwebs
Mice scurry for hiding underneath the pews
All avoiding the skeletons of misery upon them all

As the ghostly shape nears the altar
Candles of pure white begin to glow
Casting shadows about the broken and dew encased walls
The unforgived and hopeless wail their misery
Their God has abandoned them...
Who will listen?

The shape stands before them
As if He were a priest
Stained glass shards crumble as He steps on them

The deserted and loveless crawl up
Their bleeding hearts leaving a trail for those starving and parched to drink and feed upon
They grab upon His robes and beg for forgiveness
He does not listen
He looks upon the empty cathedral and preaches to the ghosts of those who once were there

As He finishes, He walks away to the busy world outside
He is one of Them, nothing more, nothing less
Leaving the ghosts of the past to pray for salvation
But who will listen?

 

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12 Sep 200345 Kristian.GL
This poem is really good! were did you learn to write like that?

1 Christina Lee replies: "I'm glad you like it!!!! "
26 Sep 200345 Bryn Elizabeth Lepley
Oooo... that's so sad? Who is the person if their God abandoned them? This poem is dark... but it seems like it has a story behind it all... does it? very beatiful... another freestyle! And you know that I love freestyle! ^.^

1 Christina Lee replies: "Yay! I'm glad you like this! I sort of made it as if Dante, the person in the poem, was kind of like the abandoned souls' God. In my last stanza though, he turns out to be a normal person who just happened to be preaching to an imaginary audience that perhaps was not there at all. If that sounds confusing...I'm not a good explainer of things. ^_^"
20 Nov 200345 D Joelle Duran
Wow...stirring...poignant...sad. I really like your imagery!

1 Christina Lee replies: "Thank you!!! :hug: I'm glad you like it!!! ^_^"
1 Dec 200345 Alyson *Rainbow* Pavitt
Deep, i luv this 2 *toddles off 2 read more amazing poetry*

1 Christina Lee replies: "Yay!!! "
7 Mar 2004:-) Chyaz Samuel
I went to Lincoln Cathedral once (If you're not English, you won't know where that is) and it was spooky...just like you described in this. Well written, well structured, brilliant!

3 Christina Lee replies: "Oooo! I'll like to go there someday! I appreciate all of your sweet comments! *huggles*"
15 Mar 2004:-) Robyn Petrik
The imagery is so good...wow. Interesting theological concepts here, food for thought. Great language, I felt like I was there watching, seeing all these images. Crazy stuff...

21 Christina Lee replies: "Craaaaazzzzy stuff it is! Glad you like it! ^_^ "
23 Jul 2004:-) Michael S. LaReaux
Is "Dante" an allusion to Dante Alligheri? Cause in the Divine Comedy, Dante eventually reaches heaven and meets Beatrice and she's supposed to represent the salvific nature of women (Virgin Mary, and all of that.) The poem has some nice bits, especially the last stanza. Thanks!
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About 'Dante's Prayer':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Christina Lee
 • Copyright: ©Christina Lee. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Prayer, Church, Glass, Souls
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions
 • Views: 348


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