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"Death´s Immortal" by Christina Lee

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Clocks...a weird fantasy world that is so like ours and so unlike...Comments?
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DeathˇŻs Immortal

 

Silence reigns supreme in this reality

Clocks lay; their broken faces telling a lie

Their hands are mangled and feebly pointing

To their truth

ˇ­but for us, the dusty skeletons

That line the dirt-encrusted floor

There is no sense of destiny

There is no sense of hope

As the cold wind blows

And the times shift

 

What once was the past

Is now the present

But what the future will bring

Is frozen on the face of a broken instrument

Of human creation

 

Time stands still

Waiting for the lost souls

That grope their way blindly

Through the sands of time

Arriving to nothingness

Stillness-time is frozen

Silence-lips are sealed

Forgetfulness-a fragment of a time lost

Longing-the emotion that drives them to insanity

 

The lone reaper

Stands upon the cliff with his scythe

Overlooking all the creations

The good and the bad

Are nothing but earthly illusions

For life labels us with a brand

And we are all destined to lose

At least in his eyes

 

Tickˇ­tick

The broken hands of the clock

Painfully crawls its broken limbs

Its pathetic attempt to crawl and its will to keep on goingˇ­

A slave to its relentless masters

 

ˇ­the bell tolls its final ring

ˇ­the book is snapped shut

ˇ­the candle has been extinguished

Leaving the agonizing tick of a clock to fadeˇ­

 

←- Dante's Prayer | Enigma of Life -→

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25 Nov 2003:-) Yuki Erika Radcliffe
I actually forgot to breathe reading this. I forgot to tell you in my previous comment, sry.

16 Christina Lee replies: "Oh no!!! Breath breathe!!! ^_^ Glad you like it, but don't die! *hugs* ^_^"
25 Nov 2003:-) Yuki Erika Radcliffe
::Gasping::
wow. just... wow. this is amazing. beautifully written, and the ideas you put into this poem are... heh, wow.
i liked how you pointed out that the clocks were an 'instrument of human creation,' it brings me back to a discussion i had with someone not too far back:
if not for humans, the concept of time wouldn't exist, only the concept of change. i think that this poem illustrates that idea very well, and many others.
oh, and because the person above me forgot to dance, :21econd comment dance::

1 Christina Lee replies: "Thanks!!! I'm glad that you like it! *bows* "
25 Nov 200345 D Joelle Duran
Wow...I really like the imagery in this one. Especially the last stanza. A great sense of finality there.

2 Christina Lee replies: "Thanks! *hug* "
1 Dec 200345 Alyson *Rainbow* Pavitt
*Gasps* this is amazing. WOW, just plain (no not plain, this is wonderful) WOW. i luv this, but really, u r a happy ikkle bunny aint u?? tho i 4giv u 100fold 4 being so morbid if it creates poetry as beautiful as this one

12 Christina Lee replies: "Yep!!! I'm a happy little bunny! ^_^ Thanks for commenting!!! "
7 Mar 2004:-) Chyaz Samuel
I love the font! Omigod, that sounds horrible! I've read this brillint piece and all I can say is 'Love the font'. I'm stupid. Stupidy stupidy stupidy..............

ps. I really do love this!

15 Christina Lee replies: "*hugs* You're not stupid! I agree that the font is pretty! Hehehhehe!"
9 Jun 2004:-) Karin Schadinger
Whow this is absolutely great! My favourite line is the one where it begins with tick-tick 2

You're doing great, the only thing that confused me at first was the style of the letters (the way you've chosen to write it). It's rather small and cursive...
But apart from that It's a great thing to read!!

1 Christina Lee replies: "Thanks for the comment! Sorry about the font...I honestly don't know why these things happen. -_- But I'm glad you like it! =^.^= "
31 Aug 200445 Gothjackass
..................................o_o........this..is THE greatest poem i have ever read. everything u say i can definatly understand and relate. words can not express how i feel about this poem. this is haggard.

p.s haggard means ... well haggard is just my word i created to describe something impossible to discrib. i hope you understand what i mean.

2 Christina Lee replies: "Awww...thank you! That's so kind of you to say that! *gives you big hugs and kisses* Believe me..I know what you mean! ^_^ I always make up random words to describe stuff! "
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About 'Death's Immortal':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Christina Lee
 • Copyright: ©Christina Lee. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Immortality, Clocks
 • Categories: Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 177


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