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"Sunrise" by Christina Lee

SF&F Picture 6 out of 7 by Christina Lee

A poem about a hero. Please comment!

Sunrise

By Kristen Sun

I am a vagabond; a wanderer

I have never loved nor learned to

Cold and alone I have traveled

I have seen many places in my lifetime

Yet none so beautiful as the sunrise

It does not matter where I am

I gaze out at the sunrise

Knowing that a new day has come

When the sun peeks out from the bowels of Tartarus

I know that Helios has won

A new day begins

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Date	Name	Comment
21 Sep 2003	Bryn Elizabeth Lepley	Loading... a fairy sneaks into your mists... and skips around the circle of standing stones yay! first comment! I like your poem very much. Its freestyle, and I like freestyle poems... tho I don't personally write any! You bring greek mythology into your poem, and that's very unique! Very nicely done, I hope to see you update with more poems! Please tell me when you do! Christina Lee replies: "Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! ^_^"
20 Nov 2003	D Joelle Duran	Loading... I agree with Bryn--I like the inclusion of the mythology. It makes the dawn triumphant, and that's really neat. Christina Lee replies: "Thanks!!! Some ancient civilizations would pray for the sun to come up the next day, because they did not know if it truimphed. ^_^ I just sort of wrote my poem based on that!!! I'm glad you like it, and thanks for commenting on my poetry! hugs "
22 Nov 2003	Elke Van den Ende	Loading... Neat! It's beautiful, lovely! yay I'm more of a star-person myself ^^ Nothing more beautiful then the stars, but I have to admit that dawn has its charms too. =D Keep it up! Christina Lee replies: "Thanks!!! To tell the truth, I'm also a star person! ^_^ But the dawn of a new day is cool also! "
1 Dec 2003	Alyson Rainbow* Pavitt*	Loading... Beautiful, love the way uv shown the dawn to triumph over the darkness and awaken the world with refreshed hope~ okay, maybe i'm reading too much into it but, luv it still Christina Lee replies: "That's ok! I love your interperations!!! ^_^ "
23 Feb 2004	Karin Schadinger	Loading... sigh I didn't see the sunrise today!! Oh no... no, honestly, it's wonderful! I love it!! Christina Lee replies: "hugs Don't worry! The sun will rise tomorrow! I'm glad you like it! "
7 Mar 2004	Chyaz Samuel	Loading... Pretty! Reminds me of 'Tomorrow' by Avril. I'm an Avril lookalike, by the way. I just got accepted by the biggest agency in Britain! Sorry, not the point. I really love this. Gives hope for the future! Chyaz ^_^ Christina Lee replies: "Thank you! Wow...that's amazing how you got accepted in the biggest agency! Congrats to you! hugs"
15 Mar 2004	Robyn Petrik	Loading... Look, I'm back already...and I'm glad I am! This is really pretty, and got good power to it too. I love the word vagabond eats word of the day Christina Lee replies: "I like the word vagabond too! ^_^ Hurray for vagabonds! "

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About 'Sunrise':

• Status: OK
• Created by:

Christina Lee
• Copyright: ©Christina Lee. All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Sunrise, Life
• Categories: Warrior, Fighter, Mercenary, Knights, Paladins
• Views: 212

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