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Elizabeth ´Celesta´ Kretzschmar

"Price of Freedom II" by Elizabeth ´Celesta´ Kretzschmar

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Finally got around to writing this part! Yay. Tell me what ye' think... its just a rough draft so please forgive the spelling and grammer mistakes. I almost combined part III with this but I decided it was better to make it a different part.
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Sheridan awoke to the sound of claws tapping upon glass. He lay curled in a quivering mass of fur in the corner. His clothes still held the prior day's dirt but its soft cloth was now tainted with blood. Lelah's cheerful face peered through a window, but when her gaze found her friend her face fell with a gasp. His limbs were bent in unnatural positions and his fur matted with dried blood. She watched in horror at his failing attempts to turn and see her. Such a simply task but yet even this was beyond him. Fear struck her heart and a short cry escaped her lips. This really had gone on long enough. The young tigress shoved the window open and crawled through--eagerly speeding toward him. It was well past noon and she was gone for now, but this was the first time very long while that Sheridan hadn't been able to attend the daily ritual of meeting her. The first time since she knew his claims of klutz were false. Her eyes glistened with unshed tears and she cradled his head in her lap. She whispered encouraging thoughts but her concern and even a touch of anger clearly showed, "S'alright, you'll be fine… Really! In a few days you'll be good as new. And then, my friend, we're leaving. Please! Don't argue. This has gone on too long already… shhhh, it'll be fine. Honest."

The young fox tried desperately to open his muzzle, tell his friend it wasn't necessary and that he'd be fine. Really. She reached a dainty paw out and set it upon his mouth, clamping it gently shut. "I know what you're going to say… but it's gone on to far! You don't deserve this… we'll get you out. Soon, now. Soon. Anything thing t'is possible with friends even if they were otherwise just dreams… you'll see." Lelah's jaw fell open, her mind now seeing a missing link. Anything tis possible with friends… Oh, that’s it!! With a quick hug for her friend she murmured a pain filled 'Forgive me.' "Oh, I'm such an idiot! How could I have not seen it? Sher… we've been going about this all wrong… I said anything tis possible with friends... didn't I?? That’s what I thought! Who said its just you and me who have to getcha out'a here? Friends!! Of course! We may have to pay them some… but… oh, you'll see!"

Caught up in the moment, she hugged him yet again and then leaped to her feet, glowing with a joy. Joy of the knowledge he'd soon be out of this wretched place he called home. Glancing nervously out the window she whispered--her voice still filled with happiness yet not as hysterical as before. "Oh! I know just the place… I'll find someone… I will! I'll getcha out'a here… I better go now though. I'll be back soon… and hopefully with help. Just think! Freedom."

And with that and a last glance to her friend she crept out the open window and ran off down the street.


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31 Dec 2001:-) Alura Raetz
You silly people. *Doesn't dance* ^^
You've got three parts to this. It now qualifies as a story! Congrads! You must finish it!
BTW, I've done some more on the HOD stuff. Maybe I'll have the chapter finished by the time EW comes back. Heck, by the time EW comes back, I'll have the book done... *grins* Write more!Yay! I have a real story now! If only I could find a piece of mind to finish it with... ^.^YaY More HOD! On the main page Thomas said he was 80% done with whatever he was doing.. so maybe it won't be so long now *grins*
5 Jan 200245 Wolffe
Yay! *dances around... Carefully* i get to be a member! *narrowly misses dancing into cassandra and elizebeth, and falls anyway*

be sure to visit my library when its up, peoples! >,YaY! I'll come over and comment whenever its up. ^.^ S'okay.. I don't mind comments. Comments are a good thing! *prances about*
9 Jan 200245 Wolffe
Another comment!! Buahahahahahahaha! Another pointless waste of space and light particles! lol *runs away before anyone throws a book at her* Aieeeee! Useless comment!! *cheers* Yes.. I like even the useless ones ^.^
15 Jan 2002:-) Kirstin M. Robertson
Ooh...keen...okay, this is kind of silly, but, I like your story so far, and that's all I can say on it. Heh.Glad ye' likes. Aye Aye. Glad for your comments too.
6 Feb 200245 Sylverwolffe ~ Madadh Alluidh
You must check your library like everyday, celesta... Lol well, might as well give you somethin to check!
7 Feb 2002:-) Elizabeth 'Celesta' Kretzschmar
*grins* Basically... sad I know but oh well. *prances about* Thankies! I'd actually respond properly but *sighs* extranet is still down.
21 Feb 200245 Sylverwolffe Deamhan-Aisling
yaaaa not any more! *dances around in circles, singing silly songs*

A library of my very own;
with poetry galore,
with stories lots (and lots and lots
and lots), and then some more!

:-) Elizabeth 'Celesta' Kretzschmar replies: "Oh trully?! *skips about and joins in the singing* Hip Hip Hoorah! I wanna read some of your stuff *grins* Return the huge niftful favor you've given me with all your comments. *nods* Come back and give me a link ^.^"
18 Mar 2002:-) Frances Sylverwolffe Gibbs
Lol *dances 'round and step on her tail.. Falls on her nose again* owww!
Tehehehee *runs back to her own territory*
yup, i am very over exuberant about all this, arnt i? >.<

:-) Elizabeth 'Celesta' Kretzschmar replies: "*tries not to giggle* Aww *hands 'er a heating pad for her nosey* Who says overly exuberance is a bad thing?"
3 May 200245 Siobhan F. Ball
awwwwww! Poor Sheriden!Sniff!

:-) Elizabeth 'Celesta' Kretzschmar replies: "Aye, Aye. ^.^ "
30 Jul 200545 Kathryn E. Frizzell
Oooooo! Lel! Get him OUT of there! Eeekers! White Tiger Cub to the rescue! Heeheehee! 6.9 Silly silly silly peoples! o.0
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'Price of Freedom II':
 • Created by: :-) Elizabeth ´Celesta´ Kretzschmar
 • Copyright: ©Elizabeth ´Celesta´ Kretzschmar. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Childabuse, Lelah, Sheridan
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