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Bella Feine

SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by Bella Feine

Bella ...is a strange girl who lives in a sparkly world full of butterflies and cups of tea...
 
 
 

Cold
My whole life in one grain of sand...
Princess Hyacinth
Prologue
Random Chapter
Rose
The Seven Sisters of the Fountain
The Death of King Arthur
The Wyvern's Library
Ugg and Bob
Voiceless

 
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23 Feb 2006:-) Freyja Meredith Stokes
Hiya! Thought I'd return the visit 2.

*graciously accepts first comment cookie and munches thoughtfully*

*pauses*

*rummages around, looking for robes of state*

*gives up*

*places rubber chicken on her head*

I hearby present you with the slightly squashed muffin of return first comment, may all your brilliant ideas come at a reasonable hour instead of 2 in the morning

You have an engaging style of writing, and I love imagery and the rhythm/beat to your poetry! Modern verse is all very well, but there's something special about reading a poem that feels like it's taking you along a path as well. It's nice 2 'meet' u, and 2 have such friendly neighbours! (oh, and don't mind the dragon, he's welcome to any edam lying around the place 2 )

*bows graciously and starts as neglected rubber chicken falls off head*

*looks around awkwardly*

*coughs*

1 Bella Feine replies: "Thank you for returning the comment! *pats rubber chicken* *looks at muffin and then breaks it in half*Mmm, yummy...*slurp*albert says he like you, but found no cheese!thank you for being my first commenter! Yay!"
4 Mar 2006:-) Athene Grele
I, too, am here to return a comment.

Yay! I am not the only fourteen year old writer in the woods! Wait... I already knew that... My cousin Zoe is fourteen too. *smacks self*

I have brought Albert some Edam and Nutella on toast.

I liked your poem, Cold. It was very cool (hahaha.... um, yeah).
*Glances around, spots rubber chicken, and snatches it*

Gotta go!

Mwaaaaahaha! The chicken is mine!

1 Bella Feine replies: "Oi! Give that back!!*runs after chicken, gives up after 3cm and sits back down on the tree stup**slurp crunch*How many times have I told you not to talk with your mouth full?Albert says thank you lots.Everybody likes that poem..."
5 Mar 2006:-) Simi Landau *Muffin Queen*
Hey! You commented pretty recently on my story "Cried the Reaper," so I thought I let you'd know that the next part, "Thy Sting and Victory," is up!
Cheers!

3 Bella Feine replies: "I have read it and it is BRILLIANT!! I love it. and I hate you for that ending! Why,oh why couldn't you have left something other than a cliffhanger?? 2Don't worry, it's good really.My advice to anyone around here at this minute, READ 'Cried the Reaper' and it's sequel they are FANTASTIC! "
14 May 2006:-) Stephanie Rennolds
Bella! Hi! [waves] You commented on one of my stories. I am finally getting around to returning the favor. ^_^ I do not have time to read right now, but I will. I need to create a list of things to read.... Lord knows I'm behind.
7 Aug 2006:-) Athene Grele
Ummmm....
You were so enthusiastic about my story, Sapphire Eyes, I just decided to drop by and say I have updated and I now have chapters 1-6 available to read.
And chapters 7-10 will be up as soon as the mods clear them.

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