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M. B. Savchovska

"Annawill ais!" by M. B. Savchovska

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This is about the so-called Order of the Sun, an ancient priest order. About the beginning: Annawill moen, Annawill, ais! Annawill awn, Stel te vlais! From elven this means 'Sun my, sun, hail! Sun bright (or holy), you're precious for us!'
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Annawill moen,
Annawill, ais!
Annawill awn,
Stel te vlais!

 

Look into the sunshine
Rising from the sea’s line
Above the whole land,
The day illuminate,
Let of time the sand
Run, be never late.

 

Chelien, I hail thee!
With thy light you bless us all free,
And when the dawn breaks
Like birds our spirits fly
Across the starlit lakes
And into the bright sky.

 

Though when the night come
So many shall arise,
If you are gone
Still blackened be the skies.

 

Back into light
We can believe
For ages in tomorrow,
But in the night
We mourn, and leaf
We fall into the sorrow.
Give us the might
To crush the grief,
And save us from this hollow,
And then we shall kite
With o’r belief,
And thee we’ll ever follow!

 

There is a mystery I know we shall reveal
For all the people and all those living into the young land,
And for the history belike shall be a seal,
A key to the riddle and a message from my hand.

 

Though when the night come
The stars will not arise,
If you are gone
Still we shall fly the skies!

 

Annawill ais!
Annawill ais!
Annawill ais!

←- The Four Guardians | Brilliance of Moonrays -→

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9 Mar 2004:-) Nicole Poweleit
The way you used the Annawill moen, Annawill, ais, Annawill awn, Stel te vlais gave this an almost prayer like feeling. I thought it was a very interesting way to open a poem.

:-) M. B. Savchovska replies: "10x. It was actually meant to be a translation (from Elven f'course 12) of the hymn to the sun of an ancient Order, so I guess it might be called a prayer too."
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About 'Annawill ais!':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) M. B. Savchovska
 • Copyright: ©M. B. Savchovska. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Sun, Priest, Order
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy
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