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Jennifer L. Post

"Crazy Day" by Jennifer L. Post

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The very first of my 'Kylana and Bremen' stories. Originally it was just a story written for english when I was 14. I really came to love the characters though, which is why there are other stories, heh. Eventually, I plan on rewriting it in third person... but at the moment I am busy with other things.
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"This is all your fault Bremen!" I exclaimed. "You just had to go flying over Morgdan's Forest didn't you?" we were standing in a clearing that was ringed by fog. I had tried peering through it once but stopped trying since it was a waste of time. Bremen snorted.

            "It isn't my fault that some stupid knight shot me in the wing and I couldn't land anywhere but right here is it?" he asked.

            "Well I guess not." I admitted reluctantly. "But we may be stuck here for days until your wing heals. Those trees move around so that you end up going in circles." Bremen nodded and tried his injured wing. I had broken and pulled out the arrow, and the wound wasn't bleeding; but I knew it would start to if Bremen tried any flying or moving about.

            "I think," he said after a moment of consideration. "That if you could find some bindwort to put on it, I could fly us out of here."

            "But there isn't any growing around here! Do you think there could be some out there?" I asked him pointing to the tree line. If I hadn't been so nervous I would have remembered what I already knew; bindwort grew in almost any forest as long as there was grass.

            "How should I know? You’re the herbalist!" he replied with an annoyed tone in his voice. Now I remembered but I was afraid of going out among those moving trees alone.

            "How will I find my way back here?" I wondered aloud.

            "Do you have any string in your pockets?" asked Bremen.

            "No I don't." I replied.

            "You'll just have to trust to luck then." he said with a deep sigh.

            "You'll be ok here alone?" I asked doubtfully.

            "Certainly, I don't think that the trees come into the clearings." he told me. I walked to the clearing edge, hesitated a moment, and then plunged into the forest.

            It wasn't so bad once you got in. The trees never moved while you were looking; although I often thought I could see them doing so out of the corner of my eye. There was hardly any underbrush and the thick, green moss was like a carpet; so my progress was rapid. As I walked, I scanned the forest floor for the bindwort's sword-like leaves.

            I don't know how long I walked amidst those disturbing trees, but a long while seemed to have past when I saw another clearing up ahead. I ran toward it; thinking that it was the one Bremen and I had landed in. This forest did make you go round in circles didn't it? When I reached the edge of the trees I stopped in amazement.

            In the middle of the clearing was a cottage! It was neat-and-tidy looking and gray smoke rose from the chimney. And there in the space surrounding it, wonder of wonders! Hundreds and hundreds of plants with sword-like leaves!

            "Bindwort!" I breathed in awe.

            Of course I couldn't just TAKE the bindwort; that would've been stealing. So I threaded my way carefully through the plants towards the cottage and knocked on the door. It was opened by a little old man with a snowy beard flowing nearly to his waist.

            "I am Morgdan, keeper of this forest. How may I help you my daughter?" his voice was like the wind in the trees; late and rustlely.

"Yes sir, there is." I said politely. "My friend Bremen got shot in the

wing by a knight an-"

            "You have befriended a dragon!?" Morgdan exclaimed in obvious

surprise. "What is your name?"

            "Kylana Drago" I told him.

            "Hmm..." the old man replied. "So your friend is injured and you would like to take some of my bindwort for his wing, so that he can fly you out of my forest. Is that right Kylana?" he'd changed the subject but I pretended not to notice.

            "Yes sir, if you don't mind." said I.

            "I don't mind at all! Take as many as you like." said he. "They're more like weeds than plants the durn things!"

I thanked Morgdan and went into his yard to pick some leaves off of the bindwort plants. When I was done, Morgdan gave me a sack to carry all of them in and I thanked him again.

            "You don't have to thank me Kylana." he told me with a merry twinkle in his eye. "You just come back and visit me again. We can talk; it gets kind of lonely when you’re a feared wizard with a strange forest at your command. For some reason, friends just stop dropping by!" I agreed for I liked Morgdan a great deal already and didn’t think he was quite a fearsome as people said. As I stepped back into the trees, I waved good-bye to him.

            "What a nice new friend I've met today!" I said to myself. Friends were scarce in this crazy world. Most people lived only for themselves and laughed at others, like myself, who had higher moral standards.

            The trees didn't seem quite as disturbing as I walked back through them carrying my burden happily along. It also didn't seem to take as long as I thought it would to find the clearing where Bremen lay napping in the sun. He woke as I approached, he was a lite napper.

            "Were you bored while I was gone?" I asked him, checking the suns position. I'd been gone a little more than an hour.

            "No, I napped the whole time." he replied with a yawn.

            "I got the bindwort." I told him, holding up the sack.

            "That's great!" he cried. He extended his wing and I began wrapping the bindwort leaves tightly around where he'd been shot. The leaves stuck to each other like glue. As I worked, I told Bremen all about my talk with Morgdan.

            "It's always good to have another friend." he said sagely when I had finished wrapping his wing. I nodded agreement and then climbed up onto his back. Then, with a mighty spring, we where airborne.

 

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16 Nov 200545 Keith Clancy
It was good, but not as good as the one about the knight, which I read first by mistake. How come this is in first person, while the others in third?

:-) Jennifer L. Post replies: "Well, this is the very, VERY first K/B story that I ever wrote... I think was maybe, fourteen or so? Anyways, at the time I was actually writing about my alter-ego person/muse (Kylana), so I wrote it in first person. But after I wrote New Beginning for a library contest, she kinda became more of her own seperate character... so yeah.I need to revise this some time so it fits better with the others. ^-^"
30 Mar 200645 Leslie Meyer
Hello there! I found it, yay me!!! (claps hands enthusiastically)

Wow, you wrote this when you were fourteen? (does some quick calculating) That means you were a year younger than i am right now... how time flies!

I like it very much... feared wizards are always fun to read about, as are dragons! Drago... is that a play on the Latin -Draco-?

2 Jennifer L. Post replies: "hehe, yes it does indeed fly by. ^-^ And no, Drago is not really a play off of Draco... it is really just Dragon without the N. lol Don't laugh now, I was about 12 or 13 when I came up with Kylana. "
3 Apr 200645 Anonymous
This is good! Have to read some of the others now... *goes off reading* I like your style. And I like the forest! I'm just crazy about mysterious forests, I don't know why (all my stories have some kind of forest in them, isn't that strange?)

1 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Not that strange. I'm kind of obsessed with forests too. Thank you very much for the comment."
25 May 2006:-) Daryl Cooper
Hmm... first person point of view. Done... properly. A rarity in the 'woods, or at all, for that matter.

I find myself intrigued, and will have to go off and read your other tales about Kylana and Bremen. Rather convenient that this feared wizard turned out to just be a lonely old mizer, but hey! If you wrote this some time ago, as sort of an introduction to the characters, than it is fine.

A single nitpick grammar thing - dialogue rules. You followed this rule some of the time, but not most of it. Quote: * "Well I guess not." I admitted reluctantly.* The period after *not* should be a comma, and the first word after the quote need not be capitalised (unless it needs to be, like I, or a name, etc).

2 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Thanx for telling me that. I was actually unaware of that rule... though to be completely honest, I'm always forgetting things that pertain to punctuation. O.o

I suppose that whole thing with Morgdan really is a bit conveniant... when I get around to editing this, I will definately try to make it seem less so. After all, he's only a 'feared wizard' because he lets everybody think that. ^-^"
1 Jul 2006:-) Samantha E Fortie
Cute story. You did a nice job.

1 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Thank you very much! I'm glad you think so."
23 Mar 2011:-) Lovisa Silinia herlitz
you wrote this when you where thirteen?22 cool.
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'Crazy Day':
 • Created by: :-) Jennifer L. Post
 • Copyright: ©Jennifer L. Post. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dragon, Forest, Trees
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers...
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