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Jennifer L. Post

"Wind´s Lover" by Jennifer L. Post

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One day I found myself wondering, 'What would it be like to be a tree?' So I wrote this story about a shaper-girl coming of age. Confused? Well just read and you'll figure it out! :)
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←- Windshaper | The Agent of the Dark -→

It was a beautifully sunny day. The light shone a warm green-gold as it filtered through the myriad leaves. The forest was alive and cheerful. Squirrels hopped from tree to tree, totally undisturbed by the presence of the shaper girl and the elder.

          The girl looked about twelve and glided through the forest like a summer breeze. Her knee-length, cream colored tunic was belted at the waist. Her bare feet sank lightly into the moss carpeting the forest floor and her green, leaf-ridden hair swung loosely about her shoulders. Her brown eyes watched the elder. He was taking her to the testing place.

          The elder moved as easily in his brown robes as the girl. But his age was indefinable, apparent only in the gray-brown of his hair and the tired look in his grey eyes. He seeing the glade he was looking for up ahead, he motioned his charge forward.

          “That’s the glade Isha.” He said to the girl. Isha looked at him inquiringly. He nodded and she ran ahead of him into it. She stopped just inside and looked around her.

          It was a small glade, but wildflowers grew everywhere. Their scents tinted the air with sweetness. In the center of the glade was a spring. It bubbled ceaselessly from the ground, yet never managed to overflow its small pool. It was the most beautiful place she’d ever seen.

“This is the testing place?” Isha asked the elder. Somehow, she had imagined the testing place as dark, ugly, and scary.

“Yes it is. Beautiful isn’t it?” The elder replied as he entered the glade behind her. He directed her towards the little spring. “As you know, in order for a shaper to come of age, they must find both their true shape and their name.” Isha nodded. The elder continued as they reached the spring. “This is the place where the people of our village have gone for the age test. Here we will stay until you find your true shape and name.”

Isha’s eyes got big and round. “But what if it takes months? Or a whole year?” she asked worriedly.

“Don’t worry about time child.” The elder replied. “Simply shape and search.”

The elder became very still. His breathing slowed, and suddenly he began to change. His feet widened and branched out; sinking deep into the soil. He grew taller and wider, and his clothes and skin blended together becoming brown and rough like bark. His arms multiplied and grew thick like branches. In a matter of moments, an old, weathered oak stood in place of the elder.

Isha sighed, it was her turn now. The elder’s words echoed in her mind “Simply shape and search.” Isha stilled her body and slowed her breathing; but she did not change the same way the elder had. She shrunk rapidly. Her face flattened and her hair, turning white, joined into petals. Her body became thinner, her feet turned to roots, and her arms to leaves. Seconds later, Isha had disappeared and was replaced by a happy little daisy.

Isha searched through the shape for something, something of herself, something comfortable. But it was as if she was searching through a cold, dark cavern. She could almost hear water dripping from the ceiling. Obviously the daisy was not her shape, so she changed.

She lost track of time as she searched through different shapes. A rose, a violet, a willow tree, a blade of grass, a holly bush; these shapes and more she searched but always found the same cavernous emptiness as before. She could not seem to find herself in anything and she began to worry that she didn’t have a shape at all! This was silly of course.

Then Isha shaped a beech; tall, slender, gracious queen of forest trees. Suddenly, the caverns disappeared and she could feel things! She could feel the wind through her leaves, the sun on the white, cool crispness of her bark, her roots sucking up moisture and nutrients from the soil. She marveled at a bird landing in her branches, reveled in the smooth shape of her graceful trunk, and gloried in the swift passing of time; in which a day seemed only a minute.   She realized then that she had not shaped a beech, she had become one. It remained only to find her name.

Isha searched through her memories for all the songs and stories that she’d ever heard of Beeches. There were many. But the one which stuck in her head was a little-known song, written by a little-known beast-shaper bard who had once traveled through her village.

 

Lovely, gracious, queen among trees,

Your slender form many have eyed.

But always lonely you’ll be,

For you have given your heart to a rouge.

 

Yes you are Lilishana; wind’s lover.

But you wonder will he ever come again?

To sing through your leaves and wrap you,

In the strength of his loving caress.

 

She had loved the song and had thought of beeches as lonely lovers ever since. This was her name then.

Isha slowly left her beech shape and became a young girl again. She looked around; the glade looked the same as before. “How long was I shaping?” she wondered. “Well, I guess I won’t know till we get back home.” Isha turned to where the elder was also returning to human form. He smiled.

“Well done! Let us hurry back to the village now, so that we can prepare your coming of age feast!” the elder’s eyes brightened and the girl knew that he was mentally licking his lips. She barely held back a giggle. She was sad to leave such a beautiful place, but the thought of the coming feast did cheer her.

The elder looked at her suspiciously, but she only smiled.

“First though,” he continued, motioning for Isha to follow him out of the glade. “You must tell me your name so that I may announce it at the feast.”

“My name is Lilishana.” The girl said.

“Ahhh, wind’s lover, a beautiful name.” said the elder, smiling with approval. A faint breeze swirled around Isha’s legs and blew through her hair; as if it agreed.

 

 

←- Windshaper | The Agent of the Dark -→

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1 Jan 2004:-) Rondel L. Linder
I came here to see the gallery of the writer who'd left such wonderful glowing comments throughout my writing gallery; I never know what to expect when I do that, but this time I found a real treat, and a story which became my daughter's special Birthday Treat for her bedtime story, at Family Reading Time. Congratulations, especially, on creating a riveting fantasy story that is accessible to people of all ages, without either including the disturbing elements of violence to make a piece unsuitable for younger or more sensitive readers, or creating the bland pablum that results when many writers try to write *without* adults-only material. Creating something that *all* of the members of a family can relate to, each on their own level, is an impressive triumph, and one in which I hope that you are able to take an appropriate amount of pride and satisfaction. Excessive pride may lead to destruction, but excessive modesty can lead an artist to go unseen and unheard, and in your case especially, that would be a real shame. So, hoard up your compliments and tell them between your fingers like beads, if it helps -- but please keep writing, and sharing the results with us!! And, I hope you'll consider pursuing publication; this story, in particular, would make a lovely illustrated children's book, about the importance of recognizing one's true self-identity, especially in a world which requires us to wear many faces. 2

11 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Thank you so much. Your comment really means a lot to me; and it came just in time! 2 I get so discouraged every time I come to my page and find no new comments. I get to thinking that my stories must not be very good; but thanx to you and your lovely, wonderful comment (and also the lovely e-mail you sent me) I shall have high spirits for two months at least! I feel honored that you used my story as a birthday treat for your daughter, I hope she liked it. I actually have considered publication, though I never thought about it being a book. Once again, thanx very much for your comment, it meant a lot to me."
24 Jan 200445 Niki coolkitty168@yah...com>
Beautiful, simply beautiful. The characters, bare and simple, nothing extravegant about them. The words are the characters clothing, wrapping them in a finery that is greater than a queens. The plot itself is the bare ground underneath and the simplicity of it is the sky. You have painted this picture with your talent, as all people do with their own, whether basketball, singing, sewing, or writing, no matter what it is always beautiful in someone's eye. And you have touched many with your words, your skill, your pure talent. You were truely destined to write.

11 Jennifer L. Post replies: "What can I say but "Thank you so very much!" I often wonder if my writing is any good, but apparently it is! *smiles*"
12 Mar 200445 Snapdragon
I find myself drawn to this story, as I love the thought of shape-changing and those who practice it. Your detail and description are soft, hidden, always there, carefully enfolded within the story itself. Most who attempt to write like this end up with idiotic, childish characters, flat, unimaginative description, no plot whatsoever in the forced innocence, and judging inner identity as character development. Being a writer myself, I envy your talent and ease, though envy is a sin. Keep writing or fear my wrath.

2 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Thank you very much, I've always loved the idea of shape changing as well. As for the other, I still wonder how I managed that. lol Everytime I read I'm like, "Wow, I can't believe I wrote that!""
8 Jan 200545 Tamara
I remember this one! So very imaginative and creative.
T.

1 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Hehe, thanx. I'm glad that you remember it."
22 Nov 200545 Keith
Whoa, I thought that I had commented on this already... weird.

Well, I think that the description was wonderful, and the whole concept was flawless. The ending was also brilliantly done, clean and simple, I like it.

Oh! I think I should have my own stories up by the end of the week, then you can bug me as much as you want!

45 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Yes, the bugging shall commence soon... so says the sneaky ninja! ^-^ I'm really glad you liked the story dude; tis my very favorite of ALL my short stories. In fact, it's the only one that made it into my 'Best of" book... remind me to tell you about that sometime."
27 Mar 2006:-) Annika Åström
Oh, just saw something that confused me a bit;
"He seeing the glade he was looking for..."
He seeing? Maybe it's a typo, or maybe it's just me not getting it.

16 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Yeah, that's a typo... hadn't noticed it before. There's supposed to be a comma after 'He'.

"He, seeing the glade he was looking for,..." That's how it's supposed to look."
27 Mar 2006:-) Annika Åström
Ah well, not sure what to say really other than I think this story is all lovely and well-written and that it's nice that if one want to, one can make it all deep-meaning and such. Fitting title to.

2 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Thank you very much for your comment. It's great that everyone seems to like this one so much. Perhaps I shall take the leap and see about getting it published. ^-^ Thanx again."
1 Jul 2006:-) Samantha E Fortie
This is a wonderful story. It could end here or continue on into a long story if you wanted. I love the trees and the comfort of a spring or summer breeze. You have brought imagery perfectly into the story I could see the little girl becoming a tree and so forth. An enjoyable story by far and a well deserved mod's choice.

2 Jennifer L. Post replies: "Everytime someone leaves on comment on this one, it just makes me smile. So thank you! Very interesting that you should mention that it could be continued, because I have actually thought about that recently. ^-^ And also not-so-recently. lol In fact, Windshaper was supposed to kinda be a sequel to this one. Didn't really work out though."
11 Nov 200645 Katherine
I extremely like the idea, Wind's Lover. I love the wind so dearly that this peice is rather nice to read for me. my only question (as this is done so wonderfully i can find no flaw), Why must she find a name and true shape ?? The true form for a shaper is right but when the idea is introduced it seems not so detailed as all else. . . Nay, nevermind my question. I think i should learn to accept the unexplained. 12

2 Jennifer L. Post replies: "  The wind is very dear to me as well, which is possibly how this whole thing got started in the first place. hehe The reason that the whole 'true shape and name' thing is not explained a lot is because it's just part of their culture, it's how they come of age. Shapers, especially plantshapers like these two, believe very strongly that your name tells who you are... so, when you come of age and find your true shape (which is the embodiment of 'who you are'), then you choose a name which fits you, and often futher defines you. Parents, and sometimes close friends, will still call them by their 'child' names on occaision though. ^-^

I tried to kind of bring the basics of that idea across in the story itself, without braking from the main tale to explain it. In some later story I may get further into the nuances of Shaper culture..."
2 May 2008:-) Mandy Tegan Kishena
What a wonderful blend of magic! And what a beautiful name Wind’s Lover is!
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'Wind's Lover':
 • Created by: :-) Jennifer L. Post
 • Copyright: ©Jennifer L. Post. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Beech, Shape, Shaper, Shaping, Trees
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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