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Emma-Jane C. Smith

"Dragon´s Tooth and Dragon´s Bone (poem)" by Emma-Jane C. Smith

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Poem I wrote for the Herscher Project. The main theme was dragons. YAY!! ^_^
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Dragon’s tooth and dragon’s bone


Do not travel in the darkness alone


Dragon’s blood and dragon’s breath


If you do you’ll be courting death


Dragon’s scales and dragon’s claws


Watch out for those mighty jaws


Dragon’s eyes and dragon’s flame


It’s your soul it’ll come to claim


Dragon’s mirth and dragon’s will


Your lifeblood it wants to spill


Dragon’s cave and dragon’s tail


Will come at you like a mighty gale


Dragon’s snout and dragon’s ears


You won’t have to time to shed your tears


Dragon’s lair and dragon’s gold


Why didn’t you listen to what you were told?


Dragon’s heart and dragon’s womb


You’re just in time to seal your doom


←- Diary of an Evil Child: Ch02 | Fate's Choice -→

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5 Jul 2006:-) Patricia M. D´Angelo
You did a fantastic job on this poem. And I dare say the adventurer has been aptly warned to stay clear of dragons.
I really enjoyed the piece.

Now you should write one for the dragequat. I hear those are really horrible creatures.:>

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "YAY! Thank you! ^_^ ...tee hee hee I can just imagine the stupid adventurer getting goggled up! 2Ohhh! I will write a poem about those fearsome dragequats!! 2 What a perfectly wonderful idea! tee hee hee!"
17 Aug 2006:-) Beth Alice O´Leary
Yay! Dragon poem! I love it, the ending is scarey... I've certainly been put off going into a dragon's cave (yeah, alright, I'd never be brave enough anyway!)

Just one bit didn't seem to me to scan quite right, but it's a personal opinion only:

'Dragon’s cave and dragon’s tail
Will come at you like a mighty gale' - you could just change the last line to 'will come at you, a mighty gale', just so it fitted better, maybe?

Anyway, great poem! 1

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Hmmm.... I suppose it does need that comma! Thanks for that! Glad you liked it! .. and I've never been very brave either! 2"
29 Nov 2006:-) Dragonflies2
Ooh! So cool! Though the first lines didn't...Though maybe i was reading it...Hmmm.

Me loved it! Mmhmm ^_^

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "YAY! I'm happy that you liked it! ^_^ Dragons are dangerous pets!"
21 Mar 2007:-) ´Disco´ Vic Alfieri
This poem is really good! It's a good dragon poem, good meter, good rhythym, good rhymes, just good. Oh and good story too 2

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "^_^ I'm quite proud of it too! Thanks!"
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About 'Dragon's Tooth and Dragon's Bone (poem)':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Emma-Jane C. Smith
 • Copyright: ©Emma-Jane C. Smith. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dragon, Dragons, Tooth, Bone, Doom, Claws, Scales, Blood, Soul, Womb
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters
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