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"The Shadow Within Us All" by Emma-Jane C. Smith

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There is evil within us all, and only one way to battle it.
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←- The Saktish | The Shatters of Time Ch01 and 02 -→

Kathleen made her way through the forest as the blackened branches reached for her. The moonlight glinting on a far off world where nothing is as it seems. The gnarled branches groped and prodded as she made her way on swift feet to her destination. The frost in the air making puffs of mist where her breath expired. She could hear the timing of the Wolfhound place beating in time with her breast. She must make it or never live, never die, be stuck in limbo with evil guiding her every thought. An evervesance of light seeping after her. She did not know what would finally happen when she reached the destination of the Four. She being one Fourth, a group gathered to run to this place to seek the solution of the world’s torment. The awakening was occurring, life that once lay dormant in every living creature was stirring. The power that would destroy the earth. There was a whisper on the breeze. A fervent prayer that it would not be too late. The trees were awakening and Kathleen dreaded to think of what other tings were stirring within the dark forest of shapes, smells and dampness.


In the distance, Kathleen finally made out the structure of the Wolfhound, a secret place where wolves once had their chance to destroy the shadows. Every century the different beings of the earth are given the chance to stop the shadow. The first chance was given to the wolves, who were said to have created the Wolfhound structure by weaving their magic through their howls to the moon. As the eons passed, each trial completed has only ever been able to stop the shadow for that century. Somehow it had always come back with a vengeance for blood that time had only made worst.


This time the chosen were from the humans, Kathleen, who was one of the Four innocence. Which is why Kathleen runs from the east to where the Wolfhound lays hidden within the depths of the forest.


Abruptly the forest ceased and before her lay the stone structures of the Wolfhound. There were four dour doorways that in the circular structure that lead into the heart of the building. One door facing north, another south, east and west. As Kathleen approached the east doorway, she saw the others. Cautiously they all approached their doors, a blue light engulfed them simultaneously. In that flash of light they were sucked into a maze. All four now stood in a circle, the maze of green hedges coming out from a sandstone floor. The hedges were suffocating, long tendrils,tentacles of hands emerged as the leafy branches grew longer.


Kathleen and the other three did not know what to do. Did they face the maze, each taking their own path or was there only one right way that they all must reach? In the center of their circle a dark mist rose from the ground giving fourth a hideous howl. The Four ran, each into his or her own entrance to the endless twists and turns of the maze. Again Kathleen was running, her breath misting before her. This time there was a shadow that moved to swallow her, this time she was being chased.


She lost count of the many twists and turns that she took, the darkness always reaching out towards her. She stumbled on some uneven paving. Looking back her eyes widened, then her brow drew down in hate. She stood to face the darkness, her fear gone. In the last few moments she took courage from the distant shouts of defiance that whisps of wind brought forth on the breeze. She then yelled her own defiance and before her appeared a sword of wrought steel and flame. Hefting it, a snarl came to Kathleen’s lips. At the last instant, just before the shadow encumbered her body, she swung the mighty sword at her opponent.


To her amazement the shadow dissipated and on the ground there lay a figure wrapped in a cloak of pure black. Cautiously, Kathleen bent down and lifted the figure’s hood. There lay the handsomest man she had even seen, his face drawn and pale. He looked into her blue-gray eyes, his that were bright green tore at her soul. He whispered,


“Please don’t kill me… I beg you”.


His words softened her heart but she came to realize that her choice would change the future. Did she show mercy? Or perhaps revenge? The thought that troubled her most was to decide what had all the other Chosen ones before her, done. She knew that the power of the Wolfhound could destroy the shadow forever. Why had it not been destroyed long ago instead of being put into dormancy? Then the thought came to her. Only the innocent had been chosen. Within each set of Four, one was chosen, at random, this innocent would have to decide between killing the shadow or showing mercy.


They had all chosen mercy, she was sure of it. At the very crux of the thoughts of each of the Four was to retain at least some of their innocence because they were afraid of the shadow. Afraid of their hatred for it. The only defense against the shadow known, was innocence. Fear it seemed, had always had chosen the path for them.


She looked down once more at the figure that lay cowering before her and her sword. Kathleen knew what must be done. She lifted the sword once again, bringing it down to pierce his venerable heart. He went stiff, agony constricted his face and then relaxed into death. Tears streamed down her face as she gazed into the deep pools of his lifeless eyes. Still holding their own innocence. She lent down and smoothed down his black hair as a friend or lover might have. Then, with a sniff, she lay down beside him and plunged the sword deep into her own heart. The innocent and the shadow lay side-by-side forever in a place that would never be entered again.


The blue light returned to three of the Four who had each seen the dark cloaked man die, he had dissipated into nothing. Their swords then disappeared as they were returned to outside the Wolfhound where they found each of the doors blocked up. The dawn now lit the sky with scarlet feelers, every animal, plant and man had returned to normal. The shadow to never return from its slumber. As all things die in time, so had the shadow within them all.

←- The Saktish | The Shatters of Time Ch01 and 02 -→

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20 Sep 2004:-) Divina Mia Fuentes
...This seems a bit confusing. Yeah, where is the prologue? It has lots of wonderful words in it, but... it's confusing. *smiles in an encouraging sort of way* Who are these "Four" and why is the wolf-place secret? Is this just a short story or is this the first chapter of something?

Destroy the shadows, yes. Definately.

I wish I could be more specific about what's confusing, but it's kinda late.

*will drop by again later*

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Errr...great...umm...confusing? GET WITH IT DUDE!!!! Just kidding. I did this 'short story' ages ago and my thoughts were a bit higgle-dee piggle-dee. That's life I suppose. I don't think I'll write a prologue...too much effort. Besides I really don't think a prologue will solve the problems in this story. Thanks for your comment and suggestions. I'll visit you again soon but I'm house sitting for the rest of the week so it'll have to wait.Oooouch! I'm sunburnt.*glowers at the sun who burnt her while sunbaking by the deliciously cool water of the pool*It's only Spring and its getting really hot!"
21 Oct 2004:-) Rebecca A. Morgan
I liked this story. I cannot think of anything more to say than that. I don't know why. The only sentence that really bothered me was:
///Which is why Kathleen *runs* from the east to where the Wolfhound *lays* hidden within the depths of the forest.///I think you want ran and lay.

Thank you for an enjoyable afternoon. ^_^ I had fun reading your stories. Now I need to go work on my presentation for philosophy.

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "It was written a long time ago, in one go and was a pain to try and edit. Thanks for your suggestions, I appreciate it.*gives her a chocolate choc chip cookie with srinkles of fairy dust for flying*"
15 Dec 2004:-) Erin M. Ramos
There's a wonderful sense of imagery in this one, E-J! You did a wonderful job! You've read Green Rider? That is such an awesome book. Have you gotten First Rider's Call yet? that one was equally as good.
so, sidebar, tee hee!
it was a great story!

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Yes! I've read them both! They both inhabit my bookshelf. I like the 1st one better though, it had more direction and less darkness. Besides, Karigan gets up to so much more mischief. And nothing can beat the Berry sisters!Nine chimney's indeed!Oh and I love the idea of the Grey One... and those ominous arrows! GO KRISTEN BRITAIN!!! I can't wait for the next one!"
17 Jan 2005:-) Sophie I Starr
Cool, what I've read of it sounds really good. I've got a really short attention span. 8p

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Well I hope you come back soon!"
26 Apr 2005:-) Jkelley2
"The moonlight glinting . . ." *glinted* You shift tenses quite a bit in this back and forth from past to present. On the other hand, who doesn't? 1

To lose your innocence is to die huh? Sad but probably at least partially true. Makes a good moral, at any rate 12 But at the same time, if the darkness inside was killed . . . how would anyone appreciate the 'lighter side' of things? Bleh, I'm reading too much into this now aren't I . . .

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Yes, yes you are."
29 Jun 200545 Christabel Nolan
Hmmm......
*twiddles pen and peers down from above glinting half-moon specs*
nice atmosphere in this, although a tad bit confusing, as mentioned before. But you have some great ideas. It would be interesting to delve deeper into this.

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "I've tried so many times to make this less confusing... never works. Well I'm glad you liked it. I don't know if or when I'll delve deeper but, yes, it would be interesting!"
25 Jul 200545 Max Hebditch
*pants* hah hah urghh *faints* too.. Much... Reading.... Very good urghh *dies happily*

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Err... *walks catiously up to you and prods you with foot*Are you ahh.... ok? If not I'm sure I have a bandaid... somewhere...*finds a Whinne the Pooh bandaid and puts it over you nose*Are you all better now?"
1 Feb 200645 Kimbo bimbo
'twas good,but... WHAT IS WITH THE SAD ENDINGS! you don't need to be that creative! if you ever write a story with a happy endind you will bear witness when i pull my lip over my head and swallow it.

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Sis you seriously need to read my other works... there are suprisingly few with sad endings like this one! So there! *sticks tongue out*^_^ ...tee hee hee I'd like to see you swallow you're own head. Make sure you give me advanced warning so I can sell some tickets so they can watch.... I do need the pocket money you know!"
17 Aug 2006:-) Kim Schoonover (FreeBSD/i386 [moose] [ttyv5])
Poor shadow. Poor character. Poor dawn.

Poor trees.

Everything was described so much and yet so little... and yet it was all so perfect, except for the bit about without shadow, how does the light stand out? HMM?

Huh, thats what John said. O_o

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Without shadow/evil then light/good can always be seen. Or am I just confused with what you've asked? And who is John? *raises eyebrow* 2~Anyway glad you thought it was perfect (even though it isn't really!). You comment is very appreciated!^_^"
20 Aug 2006:-) Kim Schoonover (Darth Maul´s scary sister)
Maybe.

John is... the one named John? O_O?

Did I? I think I just meant that part, but... you'll never know! WoooOOOOoooooOOOOOOooooooooOOOOOOooooOOOOOooooo...

:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith replies: "Ack my head hurts! I shall no longer try t find out who John is!*rubbs head*And you young lady should stop WooOOooOOOooing!!... it's hurting my head too! 2~"
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'The Shadow Within Us All':
 • Created by: :-) Emma-Jane C. Smith
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 • Keywords: Four, Girl, Shadow, Sword, Wolfhound
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers...
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