Reinder W Langhout

welcome tothe woods, friend Reinder!

just stopping by to return your comments on my lil spot in the woods.... i'll even go and read your stuff

Hi there! Thankyou so much for your comments in my gallery. I get so few! Not that I give very many.
Anyway, it was very helpful and encouraging. You can see my drawings in my elfwood lothlorien gallery. (http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/loth/z/e/zelda/zelda.html). I think the "hidden place" picture is a direct link to the "Air" story, even though I didn't understand it at first. So you're welcome to come and se it.
I'll come back and read and comment some of your work soon. Thankyou again! I look forward to reading your stuff!

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Hello Reinder! I just wanted to thank you for stopping by my library earlier and return the favor. I've read through what you have up, and I love the use of the foreign language at the end of the prologue. There are minor structure issues with the sentences, but I see you already have some help with that. My last constructive comment would be to reconsider some word choices (the use of 'kilometer' in the prologue, for example). If this tale is meant to be fantasy and "aged," kilometer may be a poor word choice. Maybe create your own term for the distance?

Enough of that, anyway If you have the time, come on back to my library and let me know what you think of my new stuff. If you're looking to get published, I have a book you should try flipping through for advice. It is "A Writer's Companion 4th Edition" by Richard Marius. And on a final note (I promise), if you're having a hard time finding a publisher but still want to get your work out, try visiting cafepress.com. They are implementing free publishing for whatever work you want--all it costs is for readers to purchase the book if they so desire. Keep writing, and best of luck!