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Bernice H. Mills

"The Red Dawn" by Bernice H. Mills

SF&F Picture 2 out of 2 by Bernice H. Mills
 
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Just a random poem about dragons going to war
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The Red Dawn

She sits on the wall
and the sun rises
the sun rises,
it rises, it rose.

And she sings to dragonkin
sky-born brothers
of blood and heart,
and they rise.

They rise to battle,
rise to death,
rise to war,
to fight for her,
for freedom, for love.

They fly,
they fall,
to death,
Ruin,
damnation,
and the end of it all

And she sings,
the music of the red dawn

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30 Jun 2009:-) Meg J Milano
wow. No comments yet? I love it. It tells a beautiful story and the repetition is unusual and unique. Great Work. I only wish it was a tad bit longer, and explained a little more... 2 The last verse is defiantly my favorite though.(and I probably spelled that wrong) haha I’m glad I stumbled upon it. Keep it up!
-Meg
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About 'The Red Dawn':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Bernice H. Mills
 • Copyright: ©Bernice H. Mills. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Sing, Reddawn, Dragons
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Fights, Duels, Battles, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
 • Views: 232


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