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"Evening Star" by Christy N. Kassler

SF&F Picture 3 out of 10 by Christy N. Kassler

This is a poem about a moon goddess enjoying the night air

Evening Star

She lifts up her star garlanded head towards the west

As the night falls upon the grassy meadows

The silver moon shines its immaculate rays

Upon her white face and hair of glistening jet

Her blue eyes sparkle

With the light of the stars in the sky

She breathes in the crisp air

As she begins to draw down the moon

The crickets chirp, the nightingale croons,

And the wolves sing

“Welcome”

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Date	Name	Comment
6 Apr 2004	L. Shanra Kuepers	Loading... Aww... How can this have no comments yet? It's such a lovely poem. ^-^ It seems to have a haiku-like quality to the lines, which I enjoy immensely. I do have some problems with the html-formatting, but they're, quite surprisingly, not too disturbing. It's a very poignant and vivid poem. Short, but to the point. It was a wondrous read and I'm glad to have found it. ^-^
9 Apr 2004	Norma Peters	Loading... What a beautiful gem of a poem! The imagery is rich and delightful, and your words are used with such a lovely delicacy and precision. Well done! Christy N. Kassler replies: "Thank you, Norma!"
22 Sep 2004	Anonymous	Loading... Beautiful imagery. The entire poem just painted such a relaxing and refreshing scene in my mind. Great descriptions, and agree, it does have a haiku-like feel to it. Great job! Christy N. Kassler replies: "Thank you for the lovely comment!"

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About 'Evening Star':

• Status: OK
• Created by:

Christy N. Kassler
• Copyright: ©Christy N. Kassler. All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Night, Moon, Evening, Twilight, Star, Magic, Wolves
• Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy
• Views: 253

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