"Fairy Cage" by Christy N. Kassler

*clacks tongue* Format, format. (as you might notice, that's a rather large pet peeve of mine)

This poem... well it's nice, but it lacks structuring. It'd make the poem stand much stronger if you divided it into stanzas.
Also, there's a slight problem with the rhyming scheme:
"As she walks around enraged
She’s in a swoon because she knows that soon"

now that is not only break from the usual rhyme, but the second sentence has a completely different rhythm. It's a shame, imo, because it's a very good poem otherwise.

It has good imagery, vivid scenery, good rhythm and rhyme for the most part. It's a good poem, but it could be better.
And I'm absolutely certain you have the skill to make it marvellous ^-^

Meh... And I know how hard it can be to rewrite poetry. Biggest writing nightmare I've faced to date, actually. So feel free to ignore me entirely! ^-^