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"Lavilia Starfire Chapter 12, the accident" by Rian Sanderse

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There is still war, Elves, Dwarves and humen are fighting. They fall as brothers. Somewhere outside the fighting zone something else happens though...
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Some Goblins lost their heads, others got a dagger in their chests. The goblins looked astonished at the elf in the middle. She had killed so many in such a short time. This could mean nothing else, she had to be a black elf. They dropped their weapons and raised their arms. "We are sorry, milady" They said "We will bring you to Morgianioth."
Lavilia nodded and grinned a bit cruelly. *cruelly*

Morgianioth wasn't far away. When he saw the goblins coming, he frowned. What were they doing here? They should be fighting right now! Then he saw the black cap that stuck out above the rest. O no, this couldn't be true, he thought, she should be dead.

Then he saw her face. She was alive! He ran towards her and tried to hug her. Lavilia threw him away. He looked up to her from the ground, and remembered what had happened, what he had done to her. "I tortured you, even though I love you so much, what have I done?" He screamed with regret.

Lavilia answered telepathically.

"I am so sorry, isn't there a way to make it up?" Morgianioth begged Lavilia in desperation.

After you did to my sister and me? I don't think that will work> Lavilia's voice sounded in his mind.
The goblins didn't hear Lavilia's answers, they just saw Morgianioth getting more and more desperate.

They got scared of this elf, Who was apparently so strong and powerful that she could make Morgianioth crawl for her. * They moved backwards, they didn't want Morgianioth to get angry with them for bringing her here. They had seen his punishments, and didn't want him to use his means of torturing on them.

Then it happened. They bumped into a huge wooden tower with rocks on top. It wasn't built properly, so it started to totter. The goblins felt the tower move and tried to get away.

Morgianioth also saw the falling stoned, crawled back, stood up and ran away. He didn't want to be crushed by stones.

Lavilia looked at him in amazement, she had never thought he would be a coward. She stood there and thought about the strange thing that just happened. There was lots of noise of the war, the screams of death mangled with shrieks of terror and pain. Lavilia only heard the noises of war, they drowned out what was happening behind her.

Some goblins were squashed buried by wooden piles. Lavilia moved forward, she had decided to follow Morgianioth. That would turn out to be her rescue. The rocks started falling. Lavilia heard that noise and looked over her shoulder. She saw the danger and started to run. The biggest rocks fell behind Lavilia, but too bad they weren't all huge. One little rock hit Lavilia on the back of her head. She felt the pain streaming through her head.

She screamed a final scream before she lost consciousness. The war continued, most of the goblins were killed. Elves, men and dwarves fell as brothers, but not for nothing. Baran's head had been separated from his body.

No one noticed the accident, everyone was too busy fighting. After Baran was destroyed, Denny searched for Lavilia, but he couldn't find her. His friends took him away, saying Lavilia had probably fallen by the hands of the black elves. Denny didn't want to believe that it was true, but he went along with them.
Morgianioth went back to where the tower had fallen. He gazed at rocks in silence. Tears were in his eyes when his eye caught Lavilia's body lying there. The rocks lay around her and on her. He didn't dare to go to her body, he didn't want to know that this time he had really killed her. He stood there for 2 days, but Lavilia didn't move.
He ran away in despair, hiding in caves. He tried not to think about what happened, trying to forget the memory of Lavilia lying there. The image didn't let him go. He felt responsible for what happened. He could have warned her. He could have pulled her into safety, but he didn't, he had let her there to die. He should have warned her about the falling stones.
Lavilia still lay there, she didn't move. Everything around her was black. She wasn't dead, no , she was alive. Unconscious, but alive.
Faran was abandoned, goblins were hiding in caves, the elves and humans had gone back to their homes 2 days ago.
Lavilia was already unconscious for 5 days when someone found her. No man, no elf, but a dwarf, a creature of the mountains, who was looking for things he could use. He felt pity for the girl who lay there. He couldn't explain why, but he did. He walked over to her and found out she was still breathing. He called for his friends. Together they brought her to the caves of darkness, the house of the dwarf lords. They took care of her, even called the cave elf, Demni, who was one of the ancient elves She knew a lot about medicines, the reason why she came to live with the dwarves. She remembered lots of knowledge of the ancient times.
When Lavilia woke up, first thing she saw was Demni's face. "Who are you?" she whispered. "My voice is back," she said, amazed.

"Was it gone?" Demni asked.

"Yes, it was gone, so, uhm, who are you?" Lavilia answered.

"I am sorry, I am Demni, the only elf that has chosen to live in the depts of the dark caves" she said. "And you?"

"I am Lavilia Thinarwen Starfire" Lavilia answered.

"The Lavilia Starfire?" Demni asked

"What do you mean?" Lavilia asked curious.
"There is a myth about a red haired elf that dared to challenge Baran," Demni answered.
←- Lavilia Starfire chapter 11, War | Lavilia Starfire Chapter 13 -→

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9 Feb 2004:-) James Lunn
Wow that was a great chapter brillant;y written the battle was good but after when everyone thinks shes dead is even better great job carn't wait for the next chapter.

Thrilling stuff

1 Rian Sanderse replies: "Thank you very much James! My last chapter is still at the corrector, so I'll have to dissapoint you for now. See you later!Love Rian"
12 Feb 2004:-) Kristoffer C. G. Johansson
This is very good 2 I remember the original version you made so this feels a little weird, but good as always

2 Rian Sanderse replies: "Tell me Kristoffer, what's so different about this one? Do you like this one better or worse? Just tell me. Love Rian"
19 Oct 2004:-) Norma Peters
Well done! Lots of interesting action, and good dialogue. I like the way that the reader is left anticipating the next chapter. 2

2 Rian Sanderse replies: "Hey Norma, Thanks a lot again, I am glad you like my cliffhanger. I like cliffhangers, makes people getting back to you. To read the rest.
Love Rian"
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About 'Lavilia Starfire Chapter 12, the accident':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Rian Sanderse
 • Copyright: ©Rian Sanderse. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Accident, War, Fighting
 • Categories: Elf / Elves, Fights, Duels, Battles, Orc, Goblins, Trolls, Trollocs..., Dwarf, Dwarves
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