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"my comic hero, final?" by Jukka Rasmus

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this is what my comic hero will look like in he comic book. im still not all happy how he looks.. i think that he is too.. tall(?) dont know but something just gets my eyes!! gonna do whew more sketches... but the hands and the legs are just perfect! maybe something in his torso or head


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27 Jan 2005:-) Robert Landers
I think he would be a good comic hero... Although he lacks something.... maybe a cape? Maybe some colour would give him that super-hero look... A bigger chest area may make him look more powerfull... Anyway... I think he looks cool and I know you will work it out....
27 Jan 2005:-) Liam T. Shanley
He looks kind of like the Marines from Metroid Prime 2.
27 Jan 2005:-) Ariella M. Phillips
OOOO! Way cool! But he looks more like a bad guy than a hero...

:-) Jukka Rasmus replies: "well when i think of hero i didnt want to make him look all smily face. i wanted to make him dark and scary 2 cause hey! he is basically robot designed to kill, so 12 thanks for commenting"
28 Jan 2005:-) Joshua Pinkas
i like it though it really really really reminds me of the wierd suit Joe Mad drew bishop in back some time in the late 90's in Uncanny X-Men. reminds me alot of that...Thats a good thing in general though.
28 Jan 200545 Artist without a scanner
Could it be that his left shoulder is a little far extended? It looks that way to me... But very nice picture
29 Jan 200545 Sleepless in Nantucket
I think it's the head. I studied the picture first, then read your comments about the piece. I got as far as you saying that he was too tall. Before I read the rest I realized what it was... I think. Not to sound pretentious or anything... heh.

As I was saying, I hadn't read the rest of your comment when I started thinking about what you meant. I gave the piece another look and I think I got it. It's the head- it looks out of place compared to the rest of the body. Sure it looks like a great robot/cyborg/exo-suit kind of head, but it seemed completely alien to the rest of the body. Like it was just plopped on top on his neck. Another glance at the image, and I had it! The rest of the body is made up of parts, the base armor, then a second layer, and then pieces of armor sitting on top. Creating kind of a 3D floating look to his armor. While the head was just... there... in one piece. Maybe if the head had the same 3D depth armor kind of thing that the rest of the body has, it wouldn’t look so alien.

But hey, these are only the rantings of a mad man. I hope I helped, if not then... tacos on me, but you’re buying your on soda.

Keep up the good work! SiN (Did I mention I’m a fan?) out.
30 Jun 2005:-) Chelsea Pizio
He's beautiful, I think maybe he just seems tall by the way you drew him, maybe his legs are a bit too long now I look at it. But his arms are great like you said, and I like his design on his head. *claps*
19 Sep 2005:-) Crystal L. Longman
Your art is amazing, you have skills i couldnt dream of having. I like this alot, even if you dont like him 100%
15 Jun 200645 Double A
This is very interesting, i think the design is flawless. Something tells me, that his back arm should be doing something, it makes his upper leg look bigger than it should be because of the hand being positioned where it is. But overall this is a very good pic.
20 Dec 200845 Anon.
Personal Opinion: Excellent work, the only issue is not his height, but his thickness. He seems too thinly drawn. The legs, core, and chest could use a little thickening. once again though, its a personal opinion. Solid work though, very good.
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'my comic hero, final?':
 • Created by: :-) Jukka Rasmus
 • Copyright: ©Jukka Rasmus. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Crystal, Cyborg, Man, Metal, Robot
 • Categories: Robots, Androids, Humanoid Warmachines, Techno, Cyber, Technological
 • Techniques: Pencil/Graphite Pen
 • Submitted: 2005-01-10 23:41:28
 • Views: 1699
 • Resolution: 401x700

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