OVERLY-GIANT eyes doesn't mean it's anime. And, you must admit, those eyes are insanely large, even from anime standards. The eyes you did, however, are coloured really well and have a lot of detail.

The detail you put into your work suggests that you know how to draw, which is a good thing. I'd suggest trying something else other than anime-style stuff. You show real promise here, with your colouring and all, but too many people like anime to the point where it's all they draw. I suggest that you either try to personalize your anime style, or just find a style altogether.

If it sounds bad, it's actually a compliment. It's good stuff, but I think you should try to find your own stuff.

Rachel How do I get a ticket

Yeah, no offence, although the art is good, its not anime. Its kinda your own style that has been taken from anime.
Blimey, the eyes are hugr, but I guess that makes themkinda cute.

No no no, what she has done is neither cute nor practical. Anime is very stylised and only few people can actually grasp the technique, and I'm afraid you are not quite there yet.
I may seem coldhearted but I'm not, well...I am, but not when it comes to GOOD art so you can shut your screaming howlers if you have a problem.
You need to revise the anatomy, Rachel, and I wish you luck, I agree with what Leanna says all the way.

What the... Only 3 pics! Who are you people!?!

The eyes in your pictures look like the eyes that Artist Katy Coope draws in her "How to draw more manga" books.