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Carly ´Lhena´ Silverton

"The Lost Mind - Chapter 5" by Carly ´Lhena´ Silverton

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The final question is answered: Who was Julian bit by?Well, this is the last chapter. If you have any idea on how to make it longer, than do tell. I might figure a way to make another chapter or make a follow up story on this or something,but probably not. Enjoy everyone! Please comment on how you like it, not grammar and such.
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“Wait, so werewolves are real, but we’re not Werewolves?” Julian questioned.

“Yes, but werewolves are more like a perverted creature. They look more human when they change, just longer limbs and thicker hair, nothing like our pelts though,” Lhena explained, “ They-”

“Wait, what? So we are actual wolves with a somewhat human mind?”

“Yes, we are Wolves, our form is that of a slightly larger than normal wolf and our minds are much more complex, once you change you’ll understand. But basically as Wolves, we understand our Instincts and we have the power to either go with them or decide that there are others things that can be done. Werewolves have no control over their Instincts, they don‘t remember anything about their human life. And, with that they could kill their best friend without knowing it until someone tells them as a human,” she clarified once again.

“So, who could have bit me?”

“I have no clue who could have bit you without me knowing another Wolf was in the area.”

“Maybe this wasn’t a Wolf. Maybe it was a…you know, a Werewolf?” Julian chided.

“I hope to God you’re wrong, because I certainly don’t like another Wolf around when this isn’t even my territory. But to have a Werewolf around, would be trouble, major trouble. Fortunately, I don’t think it was a Werewolf. That wound is too little for a Werewolf to make and you said it looked like a wolf. The thing I‘m worried about is that fact that you didn‘t notice it until you stepped outside of this Place,” Lhena acknowledged, “very few places around this place have blind spot’s, but I guess that would explain the reason for my lack of detection. Yet, why didn’t I realize the Gift was with you before?”

“Well I have no idea what you just said, at all,” Julian pronounced.

“Sorry, well for one a blind spot is a magic place that not even other wolves can find others. Humans have no idea, but usually if a Wolf is in a blind spot they don’t have any clue what is outside the blind spot until others come in, or if they know that others should be outside. Anyway, basically it’s a weakness to anyone inside it. That would explain why you didn’t see the Wolf until after you were outside. But how could they know a blind spot was here, unless…” Lhena left off.

“Unless what? Lhena what are you talking about?” Julian inquired.

“I’m talking about the very few founders of this place-”

“Founders? What founders?” Julian interrupted.

“The founders are the ones the founded this town and this school.”

“What do they have to do with this blind spot?”

“There is an old legend circling around this town among us Wolves. It says that one of the founders was a Wolf, the others never knew it but his son created a blind spot with his magick after one of his rituals failed. Any failed ritual can have major consequences on the caster or the area. Thankfully, it was only this small spot and not the town. The legend says that the founder found out about his son’s mistake and cursed him to this land.”

“So, it can’t be that bad, can it?”

“Oh yes it is, the founder used his magick to bind his son to this land, meaning he can’t go beyond the limits of this world, or more so to say he can’t die. His spirit will walk the world forever and he will never be free. Free to join the Goddess, Selene.”

“Oh, wow. So Wolves can use and control magick?”

“Yes, but in order to control it you must understand it and to understand you must control it,” Lhena disclosed.

“Soooo?”

“It means you must have respect for those who know it and have respect for the power needed to control the magick. It usually inquires that you must first study and then perform the binding spell to understand and fully control the limits of your magick,” Lhena explained.

“Binding spell, what kind?”

“A simple spell that binds magick to the being, all Wolves must perform it at a certain time to be able to control the Change and the rest of their magick, for magick is what allows Wolves to Change and understand the Wolf,” Lhena finally managed to get a break from answering questions as Julian became silent for a moment, taking in all that he just learned.

- -- -

So basically, there are Wolves and Werewolves. Two totally different species. Species? Wow never thought I would refer to werewolves and stuff as a species, oh well. Anyway I’m one of them now and I have magick just like every other Wolf. I need to perform a binding spell sometime and I have no idea who bit me still, after all my questions,

Julian ran through everything he’d learned so far.

- -- -

“Hey, Lhena. So do we know who bit me?” Julian asked.

“As a matter of fact, no.” Just then an owl sounded somewhere in the creek’s forest, stirring their minds to the present time. They both fell into their own thoughts as time ticked by. Yet, the silence was broken when Lhena finally realized the answer they had been searching for.

“Lhena, do you know who bit you?”

“He went by the name of Cooper and he was a very large black…” Lhena phased out as they both realized their Giver, or one who bit them.

“Micheal Cooper was the name the founder’s son went by after being denounced from his family. His name before that was Henry Cullam,” Lhena thought aloud.

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26 Dec 2007:-) Katherine Deros
Meh... It can't just stop like that? C'mon... I don't know what's going on in your life at the moment but I might suggest, if you ever go back to this, that...SoMeThInG happens with Cooper as to why all this happened... And maybe, later on, Some conflict with the werewolves? Maybe some new characters should be progressively introduced in there to create the conflict or something... And I want a fight with the girl! and some cheesy sensual/sentimental moments of course ^.^

SO!...I loved this!! (too)Short and sweet 14 You write amazingly well, I'll go read your other story now. Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work. Cheers!

42 Carly ´Lhena´ Silverton replies: "Ok, well I don' plan on going back and using this story again. This was just a story I thought of from dreaming one night. It came out as werewolf stuff, and it was kept going to this end, basically because I used the emotions I was feeling at the time to write out the scenes. This story was an excercise to help me get out my problems, desires, adn emotions in a less destructive way, than hurting others and that hurt falling back on me later. I don't have those emotions any longer, so I won't be able tow rite like this again. But, I might write a fight wit the girl, but I'm not quite sre what you mean by that. Do you want her to have a fight with Julian, or Cooper or someone new. Also, do you mean you want to see a werewolf to werewolf fight or human vs. human, or a human vs. werewolf type deal. I must warn you, I'm not good with fight scenes, so i might have a friedn write it, giving him the major plot of the fight.I don't realy remember brining up Cooper until this last chapter and I haven't looked at it in a while. So I'm not sure exactly how I should bring Cooper back and have a conflict with him. But, i agree I should try and give you guys a little more with him. I can't belive you like this story though. i can understand why people would start reading, because the first two chapters have been edited since first writing this three years ago, but not the rest. I guess the plot is addictive, but I'd think you might be disappointed by the quality of the older editions of chapter 3-5. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm gonna be revising the other editions soon, so you might want to look around and read them if you think my old stuff was good. Thank you for you encouraging comments, it makes me want to write, which i will have time for this next week."
3 Jan 2008:-) Katherine Deros
LOLZ mm, okay...err...let's say I didn't even expect a reply lolz
hum... let's see; I was TrYiNg to say (sorry my english is somewhat limited ^.^) was that I wanted the girl to get in a fight... with anything lolz! just to see what her skills are as a Wolf, to see more aspects of her personality/style as well. *breathes* (lol)
And I DID notice the poorer quality of the last chapters, which isn't quite so bad neither, but I still got a neat idea of the situation and it got my imagination running wild for a while as you can see 14
Well, be sure I'll read anything you post if you leave me a notice ^.^ But don't stress on that story in particular if you don't feel like it, huh?

Good luck nonetheless, I'll be checking around for some updates from you sometimes ^.^
Cheers to yuuuuuu all the way!! 1

:-) Carly ´Lhena´ Silverton replies: "Oh, I won't stress the story. But I would like to go make a sequel now that you've planted these ideas in my brain. I'll give you a notice next time I post things, but right now I'm just editng Lost Mind, dealing with being depresed-ish and writing another sotry to help cop with my depressed-ish-ness. But, don't worry. Elfwood takes a while to process things, so I'll try getting some up for you as soon as possible. But I also have a deviantArt account that I post my stories on, if you just can't waitt o read more or something. Also another thing, you mentioned that you have limited english. I can trnaslate my stories into most languages using some web site I found. If you want, I will translate for you. I just hope it's a language that isn't too forgien, this webiste only has the major ones, no dialects either. But, I wouldn't mind doing that for you, if it's easier to read. I have loads of free time. But, if I do translate, I'll have to out it up on deviantART, so I would give you my page on dA, first. Okay, well thank you for the comments, happy writing."
24 Mar 200845 PookieMaster
Grrrrrrrrrreat story!!! I absoultutly loved the tension, and all the mystery... I’m sure you’re gonna be a great author one day
(By the way, I’m working on a story at the moment. It’s called Realms Of Darkness: Paw and The Gates Of Paradise
The first two were Realms Of Darkness: Firefly and the Snow Queen’s key, And Realms of Darkness: Firefly and The Mystery Of The Snow Queen!
(In fact, I’ve only just started all three of them! OMG!
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About 'The Lost Mind - Chapter 5':
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 • Created by: :-) Carly ´Lhena´ Silverton
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 • Keywords: Werewolves, Dark, Explainging, Selene
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Lycanthrope, Were-folk, etc, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love, Urban Fantasy and/or Cyberpunk, History-based, Parallel or Alternate Reality/Universe
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