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Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

"Dream Sale *" by Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

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This is a poem from the perspective of a forlorn slave to her necromancer master, who though he lives in darkness can still look to the light.
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I watch you spinning Faerytales and weaving strands of light

I watch you give yourself away to spirits of the night

I want a little taste of you, bitter sweet or cold

So can I buy your dreams today? To very gently hold

 

I want your strong conviction, for even just a day

I want to feel the passion behind the things you say

I watch your tears so jealously, they fall and stain your cheeks

They give that man the power that his fallen nature seeks

 

Can I buy your dreams today? I promise to take care

Your dreams are very precious, they are beautiful and fair

When youre at your lowest, you can still look at the stars

You can still believe in wishes and the encompassing powers

 

I want to be alive today, and see things through your eyes

Im dreamless and Im dead inside, my soul knows only lies

I want to drown in something that isnt just deceit

I want to drown in passions, emotions fired with heat

 

So can I buy your dreams today? So I can see the sky

I want to see the stars tonight before I say goodbye

I wish to tell a story of the girl I used to know

Before they stole her soul from her, before she let it go

 

 

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13 Sep 2004:-) Helen 'Fallyn Raine' Falls
This is also sad. Poor Avayelle. Ah well, things turned out in the end! ^-^ This poem is so full of emotion. I love it!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Ty for commenting. it is quite emotional indeed 1"
18 Sep 2004:-) Artemis Heart
This poem has a lovely simplicity and yet a deep, emotional message. Poignantly sad and wonderfully written.

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Thanks again. Your comments are so lovely. "
22 Sep 2004:-) Joslyn Rubin
Wow.. ummm.. Wow.. very emotional.. i was wondering how she lodt her dreams.. the end explained it nicely.. 2 Yet another good one.. 2 Very pretty and i could almost see the girl begging the guy for his dreams.. 2

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "The voice in the poem is a chacter that has been very badly abused. that might help to explain why she feels dreamless. Thank you for the comment 1"
23 Sep 2004:-) E Purington
Oooh.. For some reason I had though that it was the necromancer talking to the girl, then I was confused, then I re-read it and now I get it. Finishing poems can be so hard, I love how you end them. Wraps it all nicely up in a poetic parcel.
Cheers

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "a poetic parcel! lol Excellent phrase hehe. Thank you for your comment 1"
17 Jan 2005:-) Katie Collishaw
AAH LOVE IT!! The only thing that I ( a non poemist) finds a bit wrong is that one line.. About the encompassing powers.. Yeah, it doesn't seem to fit the rhythm. But, that's just me.. love it though!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "encompassing powers are the gods in this poem I think. It is a bit of a mouthful lol. Thankies for your comment and i'm glad you still like it despite the odd choice of words in that phrase. Liadan x"
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'Dream Sale *':
 • Created by: :-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan
 • Copyright: ©Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dreams, Poem, Sad
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries, Romance, Emotion, Love
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