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Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

"Drown" by Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

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This is a poem from the perspective of Crimsin the faery- the blood pooling around her comes from her constant bleeding wings. She was cursed by her father at birth to be like this. An Unseelie (Unblessed/evil) Faery tradition.
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Dreams so disturbing

No Truth only Lies

I lurk in the shadows

Myself I despise

 

Blood pools around me

Wings weeping Tears

Eyes Dry as Deserts

I live in my fears

 

Hate broken Desires

Burn in your fire

Cold hands that touch me

Your kiss is a liar

 

Pain to embrace Me

You pushing me down

Someday I’ll vanish

Someday I’ll Drown

 

 

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24 Dec 2004:-) Joslyn Rubin
Errs.. Forgot again! *first comment dance* 1

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "lol- i wouldn't worry- its nigh becoming a tradition that people forget to Dance and then have to come back and dance in a follow up comment 2 hehe- I like it coz it makes it look like you have got more comments than you do.Liadan x"
24 Dec 2004:-) Joslyn Rubin
OUCH! jeez. it is an evil tradition! poor faery! 2 Great poem. its just.. wows.

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "tis an evil tradition indeed.Thankies for the comment 2 Liadan x"
1 Jan 2007:-) Áróra Ó. Halldórsdóttir
Just plainly wonderfully beautiful. How do you write poems like that?
23 Feb 200745 Critic
Wow, that is a very nice piece of work. I am impressed.2
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'Drown':
 • Created by: :-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan
 • Copyright: ©Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Blood, Faery, Wings
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Faery, Fay, Faeries, Romance, Emotion, Love, Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 681

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