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Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

"Samhain Night*" by Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

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I wrote this for the Halloween Poem competition but it was too long so I had to take a verse out and make it into two poems. But here it is in full...
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The sky was black on Samhain Night, devoid of moon and star

He waited for her by the lake until the darkest hour

The moon came out and bathed the scene in glowing silver light

And as he looked into the trees he saw her pale, so white

She walked to him so silently, no sound her tread did make

She walked the earth so silently for fear that Death would wake

 

And here the veils were running thin

So thin between the worlds

She could grasp his hand in hers

Beneath the spins and twirls

Of Death’s cloak dancing in the winds

And drowning out the screams

The ever-wounding grief of nights

That broke one thousand dreams

 

The lake was cold and still they bathed, for time was small and fair

They’d loved this lake in times before, there swam without a care

The moon replaced a blazing sun as death replaced true life

As she would fade inside his arms, his soulmate, his dear wife

She kissed his lips, his cold blue lips and wiped his tears away

She held him in her arms until the dawning of the day

 

When the sun had blessed the sky

And the sky gave up the moon

His wife had faded wordlessly

Had left him all too soon

All hallows night deserted him

For Death had found His Prey

And led His people back with him

Along Night’s ghostly way

 

He stumbled back into his home, through the forest’s grasping trees

And scratched and bruised with broken soul he fell upon his knees

He called her name, and begged her come, he could not bear to wait

Another year to hold her close, its sweetness came too late

Why wait in the seclusion, and steeped in hate and fear?

The townsfolk shunned him harshly, none would let him near

 

His house so full of witchcraft

His heart so full of grief

He clutched her broom, willow ash

Her herbals and her leaves

The poems that she had written

He knew them every one

Her love of ancient goddesses

Her spells of moon and sun

 

His nights were filled with torment, the nightmares ruled his mind

The sight of her against the stake for days could make him blind

Her screams of agonising death, the demon flames that killed

Invoked by those thought holy, for them her blood was spilled

She travelled to his bedside, her face a twisted mess

She called for him to follow her, a burning sick caress

 

So haunted by her angry ghost

And crying out alone

He lived his life in fear of night

In fear of hair and bone

Left charred upon his pillowcase

For him to see next morn

So he would know it scarce a dream

And to revenge be sworn

 

Ten years he met her Samhain Night, her old self as before

And every other night she came, burnt and screaming sore

It tortured him and drove him mad, until one fateful night

He took a dagger through the town, and massacred ‘til light

And with his final breath he flung himself upon the fire

There to burn to ash and find his love, his one desire

 

So every Samhain Night they meet

And bathe long in the lake

And burn inside the flames of grief

And lonely poison take

The ghosts of all the villagers

Go hunting on that night

And death it rules the world of men

‘Till the dawning of the light

 

 

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13 Nov 2004:-) Joslyn Rubin
Wow.. An overpowering story.. 2 good work. I likes this a lots.. *firters yet again!*

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Thank you. Tis rather long I think. Definately a story poem. I enjoyed writing it very much. It was actually inspied by The Highwayman poem...strangely enough.Liadan x"
16 Jan 2005:-) Katie Collishaw
WOW!!! I love that. I really like how you have the poem in the middle of a poem. It's like a frame story, but in poem form *takes her hat off to you* I am very impressed. How did you do in that competiion anyway?

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "I didn't win, sadly- but no matter. The more I look at this poem the more I come to notice flaws. It's a good little story though i think. and I enjoyed writing it. Thank you very much for your comment.Liadan x"
6 Feb 2005:-) Katie Collishaw
I think you will be proud of me!! I wrote my own rhyming poem!! lol. Oh, I hope you don't mind but I linked you on my page.. and I linked this story.. if you do mind I will take you off of it. I love this poem!!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "I replied to this before the elfwood breakdown. I'll be round to check on your stuff again soon. I hope you are well. Liadan x"
12 Apr 200545 Anonymous
It annoys me when they use the incorrectly and when people spell badly (like i did, ironic) it was really good though, i'm even saying that twice, i'm sad that you didn't win whatever contest that was, it was obviously rigged.

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "lol, I'm glad yoru enjoyed it. If people enjoy reading it and I enjoy writing it then I'll count it as a success 1Cheers Liadan x"
12 Apr 200545 Anonymous
Very deep, I like how he goes psyco (gee I shouldn't be allowed near sharp objects) i dunno maybe cause of their great love, oh a word that doesn't have anythign to do with your story (yeah you!!!) it really annoys me when people use it's, its, their, they're, and there. But it has nothing to do wiht your poem yeah!!!!!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Thank you. I don't mind so much if people mess those things up by mistake. Alsways think its an easy thing to do when in the throes of communicating with yoru muse lol. But I like it when they get fixed to.Thanks a gain for your commentLiadan x"
27 May 2005:-) Christine E James
Astounding. Can I borrow this for a school project? Last project of the year (thank the gods).

I really liked it and I didn't think it was too long, considering the story that it told. Very well done. Keep it up!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Yes, sure I don't mind you using it as long as you don't try stealing it 12 not that I think it merits that. I hope it can be useful and I'm very glad you enjoyed it 1Liadan x"
9 Sep 200545 Gemma Holt
Heya, i just wanted to say thanx for commenting on my stuff, and as i had time i thought id have a mooch through your's this poem is amazing! Its sooo good, you don't notice how long it is when your reading it, because it flows so well, even tho it's a slight violent and sorrowful story, i could imagine reading that to my kids thats how good i think it is, (not that i have kids at the mo...)i thought it was brilliant and yeah i agree with the other comments if you didn't win that competition it was most definitely rigged! Keep up the wonderful writing and hopefully I'll talk to you soon
xx
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'Samhain Night*':
 • Created by: :-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan
 • Copyright: ©Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Ghost, Halloween, Love, Night, Samhain, Witchcraft
 • Categories: Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic, Celtic
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