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Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

"The Box World *" by Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

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A Poem I wrote for teaching a class of 11 year olds a poetry lesson. They each wrote their own poems and I took a copy of each. They are so cute.
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In a place in my mind where all the stars gather

A place never visited by mother and father

A place where all fairytales are real and are true

Sits a wooden treasure chest on a mat of velvet blue

 

I go to the chest and kneel down by the lock

And take out my key made from crystal rock

The key gives a click as I turn it to open

And the silence inside is finally broken

 

With a ‘whoosh’ and a ‘twinkle’ gold lights brightly flare

Laughter and Music is suddenly there

The box gives a rattle and glitter rains down

I wonder in awe, what is this I have found?

 

A girl stands before me, her face is petal pale

She is tall and wisplike, looking very frail

But what is fantastical, is that coming from her back

Are wings of changing colours: purple, blue and black.

 

Together with this fairy, I discover sights so rare

We ride on snow white unicorns and play in magic Fairs

We watch a massive moon rise upon a purple sky

And lie beside the roaring sea and give contented sighs

 

The time comes to go, and we hug and say goodbye

We’ve grown quite attached, but we don’t need to cry

You see, she lives in the ‘box’ world, a key turn away

And when I am lonely I come here to play

 

 

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1 Sep 2004:-) Joslyn Rubin
Lol! From about.. 5 to 10 they are really cute. After that.. I dunno. Love the poem. Its really cute!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Thank you for visiting- don;t worry I will bug you when I update 12Gonna post a ticket in soon. "
13 Sep 2004:-) Helen 'Fallyn Raine' Falls
I like this poem and the idea behind it. Creativity is so important in children. Good to see you doing your bit to inspire my friend! ^-^ I wonder what's in my box... *looks* ohh Gaelyn....not suitible for children...

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "not suitable at all..."
13 Jun 2005:-) Elizabeth T. Hartwick
This poem is quite fun but not overly cutsy. It is great for children in that it does keep the reader's attention, as many children poems fail to do.

(Sorry about poor spelling... Spell check is down.))
19 Aug 200645 Hello kittie
I read this poem before but i don't quite remember wut it said. And i'm way too lazy to go back and read it.
That's just how lazy i am. Any way, i do remember somethings and it was pretty good
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'The Box World *':
 • Created by: :-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan
 • Copyright: ©Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Box, Fae, Faery, Poem, Poetry, World
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries
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