| 24 Dec 2004 | Joslyn Rubin | Loading...hmm.. interesting. i never thought of it that way. We only meet people to say goodbye.. Wells. i think the sun and moon are an excellant example. Again a great poem. Really made me think  *first comment dance routine* Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "I do like poems that make me think- I try my hardest to write them but often the poems either shallow or full of angst or something lol.Thank you for commentingLiadan x" | |
| 22 Apr 2005 | Ellen | Loading...Excellent. What more is there to say? You have two lovers wraped up in a converse between moon and sun, it is as original as Shakesphere himself. I like how you keep the poem in an atmophsphere that makes people feel good while at the same time juggling the pain in the skies. I love how you connect them in a cool sauve way. --ellen Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "You comment was full of very pretty imagery lol! I'm glad you thought this was good Thankies muchlyLiadan x" | |