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Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

"What a Lovely Day to Drown*" by Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan

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Lay me down to sleep

Here among the shells of the ocean bed

A pretty place to rest my head

There to think of what you said

Lay me down to sleep

 

Lay me down to sleep

Here among the strangling weeds

A pocket full of stones and beads

And tangled hair adorned with reeds

Lay me down to sleep

 

A solemn mermaid passes by

I hear her underwater sigh

I envy every breath she takes

She cannot drown in sea nor lake

You cannot lay her down to sleep

 

The sweet air from her lungs to keep.

With open wound where blood does seep

As you have laid me down to sleep.

The withered wraiths of souls before

Are  weeping on this ocean floor

 

The mortal ones they murdered here

Lie with me as my death draws near

I cannot scream, I have no air

The waters pour inside the lair

Of lungs and heart to steal my life

 

The fates have drawn their silver knife

They pull my chord with heavy frown

Say, “What a lovely day to drown.”

There’s nothing shallow in the deep

Where you have laid me down to sleep

 

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24 Dec 2004:-) Joslyn Rubin
its sad. i dunno. this wasnt my favorite. But everything was perfect. i dunno. *first comment dance*

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Thankls for your comment Sweetie- perfect is certainly a high compliment- I wouldn't say that this one was my favourite either. I wrote it on the request of a friend who is doing her A Level Art project on drowning.Hope you are well Liadan x"
1 Jan 200545 Lady Godiva
Wow. Thats all i can really say. Its amazing.

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "Thank you! 1"
17 Jan 2005:-) Katie Collishaw
OH!! I am officially jealous of you also. aaagh. I wish I could write poems like you! But, I have written one poem, I am incredibly happy with myself. But neways. I love the way in the first to (proses?) you have Lay me down to sleep repeated. I love how you describe the water rushing into her lungs. AAAH I just love it!!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "You should be incredibly happy with yourself for writing it. Alot of people who feel that they can't write poems never try to. But those that do often discover that they actually can! Lovely poetry at that. Thank you for your comment 2"
6 Feb 2005:-) Katie Collishaw
wow.. I am still impressed by this poem!! lol. amazingness!!

:-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan replies: "I'm pretty sure I already replied to this one too before the crash. Thanks again Katie 1Liadan x"
2 Jan 2009:-) Katie Collishaw
I really love all of your poems. I hope you keep up with this them.... this one is fantastic.
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'What a Lovely Day to Drown*':
 • Created by: :-) Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan
 • Copyright: ©Lyndsay E. Gilbert aka Liadan. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Death, Drowning, Murder, Sadness
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries, Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 673

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