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Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg

"Haunted (Part 1)" by Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg

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The letter from Jessebelle to her sisters

Dear sisters,

I know we don't talk too much. Some of you don't really like me and some of you even hate me. I don't blame you. I understand why.
But as you know that's what happened to our aunt Hillary. She told me to teach your children about magic. So I did the same thing she did when we were sixteen. I sent them a letter and they must have received them by the time I'm writing this. I want you to stay out of their decision of going to me or not.
If they ask about what we did, just answer honestly, but don't tell them whether to go or not to go.

I hope they will all want to learn from me and I hope some day we can be friends again, like we used to be.

Love,
your sister,
Jessebelle


The letter to the girls

Dear Alex, Ellen, Felicia and Wendy,

I'm writing you because you are all gifted with magical powers.
I want to invite you to my house, to tell you about them and to help you understand your powers and how to use them. Your mothers and I did the same thing when we were sixteen and now you are the same age, I think you're ready for it.
Your mothers know where I live, because I inherited the house from our aunt.
I asked them not to meddle with your decisions, so they won't bother you.
You'll know when the time is right to come.

Love,
your aunt,
Jessebelle

←- The Dragon's tower (a fairy tale) | Haunted (Part 2) -→

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24 Jan 200345 Jukka Bushtail
Cool! Sounds good... *trundles off to look at Part 2* by the way, please comment on my page!

:-) Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg replies: "Thanx!!!
And of course I'll look at your page! I like commenting!!!"
12 Jun 2003:-) J (Proudfoot) Taylor
Hey, you've got my attention with this prologue. Good job.

*goes to read the next part*
13 Oct 2003:-) Ashley D. Horn
Hmmm... *Starts looking for the second part* I love the subject of magic, so I'm curious to see how someone else writes it.
4 Jan 200545 Mairead S. Kelly
It's good (hate to nit-pick but you need an 'h' in the word 'whether' in the first letter)...not sure where it's going but it definitely draws you in and makes you want to find out- also I love the format; the idea of writing in letters. So much stuff in the library is just boring prose (including my stories so that's not a criticism, just an observation)and by using the letter form, you're drawing the attention of the reader just because it's new and interesting (very cunning!). I shall await the next installment with great anticipation...
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About 'Haunted (Part 1)':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg
 • Copyright: ©Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Letters, Witches, Alex, Felicia, Ellen, Wendy
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
 • Views: 169


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