| 24 Jan 2003 | Jukka Bushtail | Loading...Cool! Sounds good... *trundles off to look at Part 2* by the way, please comment on my page! Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg replies: "Thanx!!! And of course I'll look at your page! I like commenting!!!" | |
| 12 Jun 2003 | J (Proudfoot) Taylor | Loading...Hey, you've got my attention with this prologue. Good job.
*goes to read the next part* | |
| 13 Oct 2003 | Ashley D. Horn | Loading...Hmmm... *Starts looking for the second part* I love the subject of magic, so I'm curious to see how someone else writes it. | |
| 4 Jan 2005 | Mairead S. Kelly | Loading...It's good (hate to nit-pick but you need an 'h' in the word 'whether' in the first letter)...not sure where it's going but it definitely draws you in and makes you want to find out- also I love the format; the idea of writing in letters. So much stuff in the library is just boring prose (including my stories so that's not a criticism, just an observation)and by using the letter form, you're drawing the attention of the reader just because it's new and interesting (very cunning!). I shall await the next installment with great anticipation... | |