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Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg

"Lunch" by Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg

SF&F Picture 3 out of 4 by Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg
 
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This is an orc poem with which I entered a contest on Elftown. It consists of a couple of haiku-like parts.
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Flowers everywhere

Little elf playing outside

All alone out there




Little elf, surprised

Orc standing in front of him

It's hunting season




Elf runs for his life

But his legs are way too short

The orc comes closer




A rock on his path

Makes the little elf fall down

Now wife will cook lunch

←- Haunted (Part 2) | The Dragon's tower (a fairy tale) -→

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20 Dec 200645 Calibur
Strange yet good.The different view points between the elf and the poet makes it sound better then only one.
29 Dec 200645 Anonymous
Aww poor elf
i liked the beginning, although i find it interesting that an orc cooks his lunch before eating it
ah well, even monsters have manners 2
6 May 200745 Anonymous
*snort* that's hilarious.
22 Feb 2009:-) Timothy Smith
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22 Feb 2009:-) Timothy Smith
nicePoemStrangeYetAmusing....
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About 'Lunch':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg
 • Copyright: ©Liesbeth ´FAE´ Verburg. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Orc, Elf, Lunch
 • Categories: Elf / Elves, Humourous or Cute Things, Orc, Goblins, Trolls, Trollocs...
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