| 13 Jan 2003 |  Sarah Colley | First, welcome to the woods! I really enjoyed onal and kamla. I liked the concept you have going in Onal, the idea of healers that heal with their minds is very interesting. Kamla was also interesting, but it seemed to be to be part of something else? It is just a few pages from another story you are working on? Also, watch your tense, you change in a few places back and forth. But, good work  Thank you for reading! I know how hard it is to read my stuff... tehe! Anyhoo its always great to have someone else read your work, especially when your not very good with past and present tense... haha... yes me need to work at this : ) But yes Kamla is just a little part of a big story called the Silent War. If I kept going, (tho i didn't) Jerome would end up going to planet Kodi to stop his mother from distroying the universe. This then ties into the story about Nikki (which didn't upload because of my mistake in file sizes... hehe). Even the story Degneg ties into the Silent War, for there is a reason Degneg looses his memory. Anyway once I get it all straight I might write it by chapters... hehe... when i get it all straight : ) | |
| 3 Dec 2003 |  Sarah Colley | ::hands a nice big plate of christmas cookies:: CoS is through 14, only 2 more chapters and book one is done! ::does the happy dance:: How is the writing coming? I do not see anything new, but I will poke around. Let me know when you update | |
