I was stricken beyond belief by your poem 'In My Life.' You caught at so many emotions, just bared yourself, so much that how could it not have become the most honored piece I have ever seen in Elfwood? I can only remember how I felt a few moments ago, before I read it, and how I feel now, and know that it has changed me. You have made me wish to be more honest in my own poetry, to actually say the words I have wanted to say, instead of dancing around them. ARR! I have to shut up now, give someone else a chance. I LOVE this page. I would wish you had an email list for whenever you update it, because I want to read everything you ever write.

My Lily darling These are some of the finest penned works I have ever seen from you. It shows how much you have changed from those care free days of 7th grade aye?..Love is such a cruel thing, don't let it bog you down I hope to see more work, hopefully not from a little depressed one next time! Be happy and blessed be!

You're a fantastic writer, and my only criticism is that there are only three pieces up here. Please, write more. There's such emotional power in each one.

hey lily! i never noticed you wrote storiez! guess i don't pay attention to much now do i . Yyou storiez and poetry are facinating. And i you are very pretty. I hope that i'm as pretty as you at that age! xPplease forgive me, i'm acting so dumb, i'm dying of heat stroke, and tired as is, and one of my friends is being like a dork. I'm going to the Caladonia fair tomorrow (not that you care, sorry i'm so happy, i have to tell someone. So i decided to tell you. Tomorrow i meet the guy of my dreams again, his name is Charley (chuck for short) he's so nice. And i hope u agree it's not about looks (cuz he's not to good looking) it's about personality. Anywayz. I'm so nervouse, and i hope my cuzin isn't lying about that Chuck said he likes me, o anyways. I love your stories, not only are u an artist, but a great writer as well. Keep up the good work lily! x*hugz*

You writing is prettiness.

Hey Lily!!! Finally, I am hear to read your poems! >
I took my time to read them carefully and...wow..you put mine to shame! ^_^ although I am proud of my poems and how they state my mind, your are just wonderful and sadness just cries out of them. I like sadness. o__o (I'm weird) You are an excellent writter and I kick myself for not comming sooner. ::kicks herself:: love is hard, me knows a lot about that. I say: don't let yourself get discouraged over it. But what do I do? I cry..I give advice to those who have problems..yet I cannot fix my own @_@ how odd is that? My quote that I should respect is: When you reach the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on. Also, everything has it's reason. Love is suffering, yet sweet as sugar. ^_^ I hope you are doing well, and that life is smilling to you. I'm trying to look through the clouds ^_~ Keep up the wonderful writtings and I do hope that elfwood will be kind enough to let us update. When it does, you'll see a link for you in my loth, wyvern and fanquarters gallery. =^__^= Take care, dear friend ::big huuuuuuuuuuuuuuug::

In My Life...wow...thats amazing...that just...amazing...aw, now i feel inarticulate...

I just wanted to say here how much I enjoyed reading your work. The amount of emotions in 'In My Life' is indeed amazing (think I said that already, but who's counting? Better said twice then not at all), but my personal fave here would be "Ai's Mouse", it's so sweet and faerytale-ish...

Please post more stories/poems.