| 29 May 1999 |  William Eterna2 Teo |  Loading...I'm waiting for your Doomed Knight II | |
| 31 May 1999 |  Arjen 'Vargen' Schouten | Loading... Man, you've no idea how much trouble it took me to get here. First there was something wrong with your comment that caused the page where you put it not to load correctly (all the comments didn't load), so I had to remove your comment to solve the problem (sorry about that). But thanks for the comment nonetheless... Anyway, I'll be back later now that I found your library. I've not so much time you see, and with all the stories I still need to read... Take care - Arjen | |
| 13 Jul 1999 |  Rick Smith | Loading... Entertaining work here. I'm sorry your link to your fantasy page isn't working for me. | |
| 11 Aug 1999 |  W. Irene Thanh | Loading... I'm so sorry Lim! Or Matthew, whichever you prefer...but I seem to _not_ get the hang of that thingy on the left side...you know, the uid thing....sorry, but like I said, love your work...hope 2 c more and I could really use some pointers... | |
| 11 Aug 1999 |  Uin: waelinh | Loading... Ooops! what happened up there? | |
| 11 Aug 1999 | Uin:waelinh | Loading... Hey! Nice work here, I could use a few pointers. The poem's awesome. Um...personal--sort of--question here: are my fonts really THAT hard to read? I'm wondering--is it just me? | |
| 21 Aug 1999 |  Andrea Nichole Walker | Loading... *Smile* You commented for me, now I will return the favour. Thankyou for taking the trouble of reading my stuff! By the way, you are very talented. | |
| 9 Nov 1999 | Benjamin Monroe Seeberger | Loading... You are very imaginative! Congrats on that! Your works are wonderful, but I will say two things:
1) When writing numbers, try not to use 4 instead of four. The formality may not seem much, but makes a heap of difference on the overall outlook of the story.
2) Watch your pronouns. Darius scowled at Frolk, cursing a spited word in anger. He scowled at him, cursing a spited word in anger. The difference? The pronoun...
But other than the pronoun issue, your writing is wonderful, and I could not compare myself to your poetry. Keep up the great work Lim! | |
| 18 Jan 2000 |  Lim Li Hao | Loading... Sorry, I've not added any new stories there yet but I promise to make a stunning move next. "The Dawn of the Dragon" will be released soon on my homepage, I'll change the links... so wait. | |
| 25 Jan 2000 | Lim Li Hao | Loading... Added a new short poem, The Great Entity... hope you'll like it.. please comment! | |
