"Fay" by Pia ´gnutten´ Becker

I like this one, think its cute and I just want to capture that "little" fairy and have it in a jar on the bookshelf

Somehow you made it look gainly despite its size. Good work!

This is a gorgeous lady. What a face! Don’t worry about her mouth, by the way. I know I’m writing about it first, but it’s the last thing I noticed. She looks great. Real people aren’t symmetrical anyways.

I’m also glad to see a truly unique body type. Many people who are against anorexic figures are still stuck in the range of very fit figures. However, I do feel like her visible leg is attached too far forward on her body. Maybe it could be placed a bit higher, closer to her bottom (with her hip bone). Her breasts could use a bit of extra definition, too, as big ladies have sizable bosoms.

I think this pose is interesting. The colour choice is in good taste. Furthermore, her placement on the page creates attractive triangles and diagonal eye movement.

Keep going!

Pia ´gnutten´ Becker replies: "Thank you for your comment, had it up here for ages. You are right, there are a lots of things I could have done better with this one. Mabey I’ll try again someother time, I wanted a little "puppet" like bodytype that’s not quite quite proportional... I’ll think of it next time and add a little more boobies as well
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