"Healing" by Karl ´Angel´ Lines

Heyla! Glad you let me know about this, lovely poem! I like how you used ordinary words to portray such deep feeling, it contrasts nicely with the mood of the poem (or I think so, but then I'm no expert. I call em like I see em ^_~). I love the rhyme and the rythym, makes it seem almost like a nursery rhyme, but way more complex...I write in that style too most of the time, I love poems with a sing-song rythym. I love the descriptions you used, you express yourself so well! Me likes!Thaks, Im glad you like it

Hey hey, I like. Time to take my poetry off
The rythem was constant for the most part, Rhyming was great.
It wasnt really deep, but it created an intense mood.

Also, I've decided that your to good of a writer (and artist) to strangle.

At least for now.*is hiring a bodyguard*

*runs in feeling like the White Rabbit* "I'm late, I'm late!"
It's beautiful, Karl. Written from the heart.

Karl 'Angel' Lines replies: "yeah, i should really use a pen but you just dont get that bloody feel"

This was a really sweet poem Karl. Did Kell read it? I hope so. I hope she realizes what a wonderful person you are and how lucky she is to have you in her life. I know I'm lucky to have you as a friend.

Karl 'Angel' Lines replies: "or unlucky "

I adore this poem. It is so heartfelt and so touching.

Karl 'Angel' Lines replies: "Thank you"

Beautiful poem.. Easy, but emotional and strong. Seems like you've found a true friend of soul and mind.. Not often you hear people really mean it, but I think you do.

Karl 'Angel' Lines replies: "well Im not a normal person "

excellent.There is no need to say more.

Karl 'Angel' Lines replies: "could add - piffly cheesy bombs?"

Very nice and touching! It really creates a fine mood.

Karl 'Angel' Lines replies: "who knew...this even got published LOL"

Oh it's so sweet.... simple, but sweet. :igh::
~LMP

Karl 'Angel' Lines replies: "like 2 kilos of sugar"

WOW!!!
That was great it was very touching and very beautiful. The best part was that you can tell that it came from the heart. I also write but nothing as good as this this was beautiful. I really could tell that you meant it and the words were beautiful and very loving. YOU ARE BRILLANT!!!!!! Good job.

I ach with pain
i cry and cry til i feel like i will drown in my own tears
Everyday I hope that i will find the one thing missing in my life
but everyday I cry again because I cant find the thing that i need to be whole
no one cares about me so i scream in pain why cant i just find what i need
because i need a person
that person is my daddy
but he doesnt love me so i have to keep crying and crying
until he loves me



that was one of my peoms i hope you will e-mail me about what you thought of it

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i am only 12 so go easy on me