| 21 Mar 2000 |  Stephanie the non-elfwood writer. | Hmmm. Not bad, for a new writer. Unlike many writers that comment I'm actually going to give reasons why I like it *gasp*. As a long time writer it think I can help. You have good plot ideas and charactures(I can't spell) but your description is a little weak. Your conversations also need work, but what I see, I like. As they say, I'll be back! | |
| 22 Mar 2000 | Catherine Albright | Hey Melissa, It's me! Good story, but like the others you have to add some more description to build some more character into the story. But good one though. See ya later! | |
| 26 Mar 2000 |  Aido Rakaen | >_< this was harder than finding Kaz! Bleh... Anywho, now that I've found you, that means that I gotta read your story, eh? Okay then... *trots over* Lalala.... | |
| 8 Jun 2000 | Melissa carter | i have the same name as u. What age are your books aimed at? | |
| 20 Jun 2000 | Melissa | Well, they're not "adult," but they often involve a little battle. One of my new ones I may upload involves 3 deaths. But I probably won't upload it, it's really bad. | |
| 7 Sep 2000 |  Cathin *Tyrablaze* Yang | AHHHHHHHH!!!! NO MORE UPDATES?! NOOOOOOOOO!!!! There has to be more!!! There must be more updates!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
| 8 Sep 2000 | Melissa | Dun worry, Cathin. In fact, I just updated...  | |
| 17 Sep 2000 |  Robin Lynn Arbogast | Meeewwttwwooo!!! ^_^ Ahoy! I just wanna say I like your stuffles lots. ^_^ It's good. Yup. And. *pokes* You should get ICQ or soometthiinng so I can talk to yooouu! | |
| 10 Mar 2001 | Angelina Gianni | ~Ahoy, 'hoy!...Eek! I thought I had commented in this gallery, prior to today! I am so sorry! *gets frantic* Er, um, anyway, totally awesome work! I can't wait for another update! Ciao!-BL | |
| 11 Apr 2005 |  Alice ´Muffin Girl´ Smith | Hullo. *waves* Just got back from that new poem of yours... not terrible, Miss Melissa. ^_~
*a complimentary basket of freshly baked muffins is desposited upon thine Elfwoodian doorstep as she wanders off as she wandered in: through the random story option* | |
