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"Nothing Is Sacred" by Elizabeth Gerrow

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Thinking of a battle at the time.. old, ancient..
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Gently she cries

As the snow falls

Upon her shoulders,

Cloaking her in white.

Lightly he steps,

A hand resting

Softly upon her neck

As he murmurs

Whispers of faith.

Turning into

The haven he creates,

She laments

The scene before her,

The stained battle ground

A curse for any child

Where the fighting

Had newly ended:

A rebellion

Against a world of peace.

And she sings softly

Shuffling away quietly

From the lonely girl,

Whispering,

Nothing is sacred

Where the innocent

Die for the guilty.

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12 Jan 200345 Acorn
I liked this as well. The last three lines were the best. I havn't written any poetry in ages. I shall proceed to do that ... sometime.
11 Apr 200345 Comex
I was pleasantly surprised. Touching, beautiful, ..grim. Nice work! 2
1 Jun 200345 Nemerith
A very moving poem indeed... And unfortunately....Very true...
22 Nov 200445 Alex "Drow Fan" Grey
wow...very sad and moving. I loved it, but you almost made me cry. =*(
2 Feb 200545 Lighting bolt
So sad! But very meaningful.
24 Jun 200545 Anonymous
Wow, really beautiful poetry, but very sad.
11 Sep 2005:-) Jessica E. Hunt
I love the emotions in this poem
31 Oct 200545 Dragon Queen
luv it
22 Jun 200645 Emi
Simply beaytiful
22 Jun 200645 Aikia
It is so simple and yet so meaningful. I truly loved this
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'Nothing Is Sacred':
 • Created by: :-) Elizabeth Gerrow
 • Copyright: ©Elizabeth Gerrow. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Battle, Death, Sadness
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