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"Prophecy of Restoration" by Elizabeth Wilcox

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This is a poem I wrote recently. It is the last prophecy of an ancient seer, who foretells the end of magic and it's restoration. The one to whom the prophecy is directed is unknown.
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The forest waits for one like you-
Full of fancies, wondering heart-
One who stands still, strong and true,
Holding to the ancient Art.

Long has it stood patient, waiting;
Where have all the wanderers gone?
There was, once, a thirst-full yearning,
Now the power dims and wans.

Trees hold memories and sorrows,
Cares and joys like autumn's leaves-
Soon they crumble, dust tomorrow,
But today their brightness sings.

Magic still abides in silence,
Though long ago it's caretakers
Left it with a grief intense-
Gone now are the myst'ry makers.

Will the tale ever be told?
Will the song ever be sung?
Of the mystics, the spell-weavers
The laughter of the golden ones?

Now a hush holds the forest
Where once gay, bright songs abode
No more healers' simmering possets-
No more wisdom from the old.

One mistake, one creation
Drastically wrong and ill
Felled a curse upon the nation
That harnessed the heaven's will.

Magic makers now are legend-
Stories for the young at heart-
Secluded, hunted to their live's end
Are those left who know the Art.

Time can never erase sorrow,
Day can never outlast dark-
The time will come, maybe tomorrow,
When the Craft returns, but stark. . .

This I swear, I prophesy,
Never shall healing be done
Wisdom nowhere under sky,
Above the earth, beneath the sun. . .

When Mages learning is restored
And magic wielded one more,
Then a time for wild grief-
For naught but pain shall be in store.

Bitter shall the magic be-
Sour with age and deep remorse-
Hate is all the world shall see,
If things now shall run their course.

Heed me not, and all shall fail;
Save not memory of those days
When the gladness of the Golden
Brightened earth with cherished ways.

Evil haunts the wicked tale
Of their downfall,
So take care. . .
Lest fate be entwined with their fall,
And their curse fades not with years.


So, if you are of right mind-
Heed the forest's welcome call.
Follow it to depthless mysteries,
And learn, grow, protect us all. . .

 

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14 Apr 2003:-) Camorra11
Wow! Really cool...I wonder if it will be like this, when magic returns to the world (which i hope it will, eventually ^__^) i like the idea of a forest containing magic, and a prophecy from an oracle...Would mind visitng my site? I'm also a poet thanks! 12

12 Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "  Thanks! It's good to know someone agrees with me. "
12 Jul 2003:-) Gabs Béland
wow...this is simply inspiring...i cant believe its been up this long and with only two comments! this is very well done, it reminds me of Juliet Mariliers books, The Sevenwaters trilogy? i dont know if you've read them or not, but this is high praise coming from me, because i absolutely love the sevenwaters trilogy...great job..off to read more 2

2 Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "  Thank you! No, I haven't heard of the Sevenwaters trilogy--but I'm off the check them out!"
12 Aug 200345 Elise .J.
Wow that prophecy/poem was beautiful. It was a really fantastic use of words and it reminds me of a series of books called the sevenwaters trilogy. Your prophecy just goes with it. If I haven't already said this your poems pretty great no.. actually fantastic!! ^_____^
It is also fantastic because it actually sounds like a prophecy. keep doing poetry your good at it!!!

:-) Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "thank you! I appreciate being associated with such a great author. *beams* I just read the first book this month."
28 Aug 2003:-) Caitlyn M. Milford
Wow! Very good! I love the way that you can write the prophecy and have it understandable. A lot of times I read prophecys or such things and people try so hard to make them twisted that they don't make any sense. *wonders if she herself makes sense right now* *cough* Anyways... this makes sense and I can understand everything! And you ahve excellent rhyming too! Nothing forced or anything! Yay! *grins* So great job!

*reads above comment* ... sevenwaters trilogy, eh? *decides to look it up on Amazon* hmm... ^^x

1 Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "  thank you! It's nice to know someone understands me. . . ."
31 Aug 2003:-) Daniel L-E. Warsén
Really nice! I don't usually like poetry but this one is different somehow. Keep on writin', you have real talent! Greetings from Sweden 12

:-) Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "*looks with both shock and glee at comment* you obviously just haven't been reading the good poems! there is no way you can't like poetry if it is well written. 2 thanks for your comment!!"
22 Oct 2003:-) Kaykamisch
Of course I love this, it speaks of everything I know! I love poetry, but I'm very picky about what I like, and this is part of the "creme de le creme" (that might not be spelled right). Just to let you know, I printed this poem on pretty paper and hung it up at work. Some of my co-workers keep thinking I wrote it, so I refer them to your name at the bottom 2

2 Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "  wow! thanks! I've never felt so flattered. 2"
15 Nov 2003:-) Aaron Green
Beautifully written. Good job on maintaining an interesting rhyme scheme throughout a relativley long poem, and whether intentionally or not it stylistically reminds me of a few of my favourite myths.

:-) Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "thank you--and it was unintentional(the resemblance likely wouldn't exist if I actually tried. . .)"
5 Dec 2003:-) Lisa 'Tenshi no Hisui' Sheridan
Love to stop by and read things from writers I know...^_^

I like the theme most of all. The whole composition sounds mysterious and sort of pagan/Wiccan. ^_^ Maybe the magic you spek of in this piece does not refer to either of those religions, but everyone derives their own meaning from the literature, right? ^_^

:-) Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "precisely. ^_^"
23 Jan 200445 Estantia
wow, all you can say, btw I have no idea what the sevenwaters trilogy are but they must be pretty good if this is like them...

:-) Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "they are very good--I just finished the series. Thank you."
5 May 2004:-) Eliza Hemington
Very interesting!

For the line "Full of fancies, wondering heart-" do you think it would read better if you changed "wondering" to "wond'ring"? Similarly, how about this line: "Where have all the wanderers gone?" What about "wand'rers"? I find it flows a bit better.

"Though long ago it's caretakers", it's --> its

"Gone now are the myst'ry makers.", What about "Gone are now the..."?

"That harnessed the heaven's will." I think if you change "harnessed" to "harnessèd", it would read a bit better.

I was wondering if you read this article: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/farp/thewriting/27brianrhyming/27brianrhyming.html
It really is helpful for poetry writing, and can help to improve your style ^_^

Well, enough helpful stuff, now my thoughts! I really loved the feel of it, very intense and deep. It kind of reminded me of a medieval setting for some reason.

I liked almost all of it, but my favorite stanza was:
"Now a hush holds the forest...
No more wisdom from the old."

Keep writing!!! ^_^

:-) Elizabeth Wilcox replies: "Thanks for your advice. usually, when I have something like wond'ring in a poem, I forget to change it from wondering (I say it right automatically). So, thanks for pointing out where I missed fixing this poem. Also, I think it has to be "gone now are" rather than "gone are now" because I'm saying the myst'ry makers are gone now and the other way doesn't make sense (at least, not to me)"
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About 'Prophecy of Restoration':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Elizabeth Wilcox
 • Copyright: ©Elizabeth Wilcox. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Magic, Prophecy
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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